Good story

I love this story. The sibling relationship between Wyatt and Chris is truly beautiful, and I love the well thought out au. I think I've read this about six times by this point (though that is the same with all of your charmed and Harry Potter ficts, honestly). Thought you should know. :)

I loved this story so much. Only one problem. Today is Chris' birthday and two weeks later he's to be conceived? In the show he was conceived on Wyatt's b-day. So Feb, Wyatt's b-day nine months later Nov. Chris' b-day. You can't have your birthday today and 9 months later have your birthday on the same date. I get what you were going for but that still doesn't follow the right timing.

The way you have this timed out, Piper would be pregnant with Chris for almost an entire year. Chris' conception date cannot be just over two weeks after his own birthday.

j'adore

Chris is my favorite Charmed character and I love Fanfictions where he dies as a hero.

This was so emotional! Good story :)

thanks

I loved your story!

Excuse me?
Mrs, Finnigan?
As in Seamus Finnigan, from the Harry Potter series?

lol Chris had to wait 18 years to say that XD

Anyway great story! A little short but i loved it. there were a few problems with the timing of Chris' conception but otherwise it was pretty well writen, and flowed well :)

Oh God I love this story SO MUCH. This is different from what I usually read but it's definitively one of the best story I've ever read about the brothers.

Meÿli.

love it

sweet! though it was upsetting for chris to goi through all that.

nice one

what an imagination you have take it as a compliment