you used my name and spelled my name exactly right I wuv you

Babashit.
the Moon is a dumb rock. It is not beautiful.
The Artwork of the Nightsky however is Natures true Masterpiece (exept for me of course )
;3

-"He didn't like others to watch, but I knew that he used many strange herbs and low, growly chanting words" Dat dragon does magic in an imaginative world... IMAGINATED WORLD!
Her Parents are Awesomee... (and messed up)
-come on... where does the cheesy insanity stuf happen ?

"And Pyro, the crazy idiot! He made me want to laugh and cry and question humanity all at the same time."
I rework it like... You, the crazy idiot! Who made me want to laugh and cry and question humanity all at the same time.
...
meh. close enough.

Why does everyone say that Sabertooth is a bastard? HIS PARENTS WERE MARRIED! (right?) .
Aaaand if I'm correct this is just anothere Filler Chapter. :(
Go on... quick

this...
was confusing.
anyone else confused by all this ?
(my storyline:
1-Prologue and Baackround stuff.
2-Mind breaking tragedy
3-she is okay again?Gambit&Moon?)

ah... jes.
the fragility of the mind of a (more or less) bratty girl.
...
pretty intense.

I don't exactly "want" to say something bad about (undefined) "bautifull" Languages, but I will:
It depends solemmly on the speaker, wether or not something sounds awe-inspiring, lovely or smthn else.

(if she's (partly) french/french immigrant, wouldn't that mean that she sucks? like... real bad?)

ps: great work anyways.

Ok sorry I didn't review the other chapters, I have only been reading this for a few days and was too caught up in the story to review. Plus I couldn't and still can't find any mistakes! Almost feels like you did everything right. Anyways I loved it. Please update soon!

Keep 'em coming! I love this story.

Can't wait for the rest!

Curacion:

*spit-take* WHOA! CURACION CAME BACK FROM THE DEAD!
...Kidding, of course. Well, maybe half-kidding? My drink stayed in my mouth, at any rate...

Still love you're mental landscapes and images. One of my fav lines is " 'Wit' all due respect, monsieur, if we don't find 'im, you won't 'ave to worry about moi anymore.' "

Dholefire

3 letters ... W.O.W! I am speechless. This is amazing! I'm insanely jealous of your talent and imagination P Wow ... really good :)

Vickie1996 xx

Fantastic story, please don't stop writing!

I think it should read 'angst' instead of 'humor' on the genre... chapter 23 was just so sad :'(

luv the last line!