Holy shit. This was four years ago. You must be a published writer by now - with your own literary work. Amazing.

loved it

I can't tell you how much I love this story. It's disconnected, so it makes you think. All these pieces fit together somehow. I like the variety of scene you include, from sweet to angsty to humorous, I think you have practically everything.

Also, you don't go overboard. The sections are as long or short as they need to be, yet they hold so much emotion.

-"Uh...?" Bobby Maler said as an answer to a question.-

Really love this section. Stereotypical, but hilarious!

-"...that's how it works. Unless you're gay or whatever..."-

Also hilarious, yet I feel so sorry for Moritz at the same time.

-Metal, shiny and silver, was very real. /Bang./-

This is my favorite line in the entire piece. The reality of violence is really shocking, yet in video games, it seems to be taken for granted all the time. Plus, I love Moritz so much, that /Bang./ just breaks my heart...

Really, I don't know how to put this in words. I think this is beyond amazing. I really hope you continue it.

I have read these before. I know it. LJ?

...this is just gorgeous. I...oh my, it's just lovely ]

Wow. That was so sad!

But still so realistic! Although at times, I kept forgetting it was meant to be AU, and then got very confused Silly me!

Brilliant.

I love a comet on its way! There is a great version of the tour cast, I wish they would record it. Will you be continuing the story? I would enjoy reading more, and if it were to be more in depth that could be interesting too. The way you wrote it made me want to read more though and I liked all the parts that you had. The part about Moritz at the end was well done too!