Beautiful.

Darn...I accidentally erased my review! XP

This was such an awesome idea! Brilliant work! The reflections from all of the book's time frames and in betweens were amazing!

Poor Su! Going from being happy and confident to heartbroken and weak in the worst sense... :'( Rock on! This was SO BEAUTIFUL! *U* *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

You've done a beautiful job with the characterization of Susan here, and you have a lovely style that manages to be beautiful and tragic and urgent all at once. This is a wonderful, melancholy look at the girl who was Susan the Gentle.

You have such a way with words, and you capture Lewis' characters perfectly. I could really feel Susan in this.

Thanks for sharing!