AAAAAAHHHH! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!

Nuuuu I need more!

Fight Graham Aker! Fight to live another day! For tomorrow!

Gahhh my heart! Stabbed by the feels.

Nuu Setsuna! He sensed Wang Lu Mei didn't he?

Such a good turn! I hope Anew stays alive.

Gahh I love this so much!

This is good! Everything is dependent on Setsuna and the 00. What would anyone do without them?

Aww... this story is very good... too bad that you took a very long time to update... :(

please update! this story is good
keep the chapters coming!

I like this story so much. When I know on this fanfic Anew isn't die, I am so happy! Update soon!

Please update soon! Looking forward to the next chapters. :)

うおおー!あやちゃん！すげぇや君！
マジで英語で書いたかよ？！
英語めっちゃ甘えよ！君は英語がこんなに上手なんて本当にすげぇ！
俺ずっと辞書見てたんだよ…
でもいい勉強になったんだよー！
つづき、待ってますよー！

りく

wow! interesting so far. hope you update soon (_)

You have quite a few awkward sounding sentences through the chapter. I'd suggest rereading lines to yourself and seeing if they sound natural.

There are times when you use words redundantly. For example, in the first sentence, you use both jolted and awake when only one word is necessary. Ex. 'Lately, every time he closed his eyes, all he could see was all the dead everywhere.' You don't need to use all twice in the same sentence like that.

"I'll be alright," Setsuna muttered, for his taste, the hundred times. should be "I'll be alright," Setsuna muttered for, to his count, the hundredth time. And you could just shorten it to 'for the hundredth time'.

"The Federation...no or rather the Innovators". you should choose either 'no' or 'or rather' instead of using both.

You're also missing words here and there. 'The Gadessa dodged it, and charged to the Ptolemy once (it) detected the 00 Raiser.

well poor lockon is going to have his hands full if setsuna has his way