breath taking! beautiful, its a shame the show was cancelled, or maybe they shud have started with epitaph one. RIP dollhouse, i know they will be continuing it till january, lets enjoy the time we have, keep writing such awesome stuff

...wow...

I'm trying to write an intelligable reveiw here but I'm a bit speechless so... yeah :)

I think this is the best piece of fanfic I've ever read, it fits so well and could easily be part of the show. In fact I wish they'd put these bits in :')

xx

That's extremely well written; you have a wonderful grasp of the characters and portray them with real accuracy. Poor Topher!

I particularly love the ambiguous ending.

This is easily the best Dollhouse fanfiction I have ever read. Truly fantastic, I commend you for your work.

Augh, hurts so good. 3 The general concensus is that Epitaph One would have been a satisfying conclusion if the series had been canceled, but these two are my favorite characters, and what happened to them breaks my heart.

This is excellent. It's so well written and believable that it could be a part of Epitaph One and you wouldn't know it's a fanfic. Thank you!

*Elialys*

Hey... Awesome!

It reallyu pretty much is like you just wrote the actual story down before it had the chance to come out. And thats slightly scary. I think that the whole Claire staying with Topher and then Topher dying scenes are very believable. I can just see it happening on the show...

I still dont think/hope Caroline isnt really going to shoot Adelle, but hey, thats just my obsession with the character :D

Anyway, great story, more more! :)

I love this story but its so so sad.

You made me cry you mean, heartless person! I hope you're happy! -sobs in corner-

.. Really nice story.. Really sad.. I liked it in a sort of not-liking it manner because of how sad it was, ya'know? Still very nice.

This was beautifully written and so sad.

Hey, good story. Really enjoyed it

Ohh... this is sad, but really beautiful. I love that Topher keeps a tiny bit of his humour with the 'scowly babies' bit.

Really well done xx

I cried. This is on my favorites now.

Ok, I've never written a review for fanfic before, but this is awesome. You did an amazing job, especially the pauses between scenes... wonderful. I admit I'm a Claire/Topher shipper so of course I wish he didn't die, but wow. Great job!