good and update in 2017 as well

exciting

cool lot

nice

cool

sweet

great start

While I'm not sure I completely like the new forceful, Minato with balls, the story is progressing well. Hope you update soon, however it's been a long time so seems like it's been abandoned!

You have me hooked on at least two things.

Well written lemons, and WELL PLACED!

The use of the established bonds to something deeper, along with Minato's inner ability. When bonded with sekirei.

I can sorta see a path for the next couple chapters as I sit here thinking about what you've done so far. It has me wishing the story hasn't been abandoned.

Hey first of all LOVE your story! It is by far my favorite Sekirei fan fic ever! I like your fic for several reasons. One is your writing style, meaning you have a great story, your writing grabs my interest, and (this is the big one) I don't have to sit there every other paragraph trying to guess at what you are trying to say because your writing has little to no misspelled words or grammatical mistakes. Two I like the fact that you gave Akizu to Minato. I think hes the best mach for her especially with the version of Minato you created. Three the version of Minato, love it. Why because he actually has a damn spine. Don't get me wrong I like the original Minato but I agree with Matsu there is a limit to how weak you can be. Also with your version of Minato (and I don't know if you did this intentionally or not) I got a vary Richard Rahl feel from him wich was awesome! Anyway your awesome, love your story, and I can't wait for your next update.

P.S. Keep me posted on that Mass Effect fic. I love that game. Also if you want to improve your writing even more then you should read the Sword of Truth series by Terry Goodkind. It will also explain who Richard Rahl is if you don't already know (here's hopping I don't get in trouble for mentioning Terry Goodkind and his work in a review)

Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon

Noooooooo. You are a cruel cruel individual _! Such a well written piece of work, in a rarely written for category, and you abandoned it! So much promise, such a tragedy-(.

I hope You come back to this story one day, Its really well written

Run's to the bathroom... Ah...

thank you this is like the only fic that doesn't follow the fluff of other fics hope ya finish it sometime

I'm still surprised that Miya hasn't interfered with those intimate moments.