Reviews for Coalescence
CorrectHorseB chapter 24 . 6/15
Hey, Kayla. Just posting this for the slight chance you might read it. Really enjoyed both Singularity and Coelesence, and wondering if Rogue was ever written. If it was, is there somewhere I can go to read it?
Princess Nessie1 chapter 24 . 3/30
This is the best Alice and Jasper story ever. Your word choice is beautiful. I wish you could write more about them. Thank you for this amazing journey.
Moneliza73 chapter 20 . 3/28
this chapter is gracious, beautiful, mesmerizing...
the garden philosophy is the greatest!
you are an amazing writer :)
wronglydreamer chapter 1 . 9/29/2019
Hi! I’m not sure if you will ever read this, since it’s been years since your last post but, I just wanted to thank you. The story you wrote about Alice&Jasper is the greatest I’ve ever read. You created a solid plot with an impressive background for Alice. Her life is full of adventures and it was great to read how she finally had the chance to meet poor Jasper. I loved every page I read, and though I found this story a few years back, I tend to come back and re-read it, hoping you would have uploaded something new. Not sure if you have the time, the energy or the ideas needed to keep this up, but I would be forever grateful if someday you decide to continue their story, and how they get from meeting the Cullens to the point where Bella joined the family. Anyway, congratulations on your writing and plot, it’s absolutely amazing. Thank you for the time you dedicated to this story, you’re amazing :)
20000 WPM chapter 17 . 5/1/2019
These chapters were worth the wait. So good! I have laughed so hard. I am glad they are finally with the family. Can’t wait to see what come next.
20000 WPM chapter 7 . 4/30/2019
I am really enjoying your stories. I should have been in bed an hour ago, but I did not want to go until things were better between them.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 17 . 4/7/2019
Great job with the family coming together. Just the right amount of tension
TrillionSchiffer chapter 13 . 4/7/2019
Let's take it from the top. The immortal childs death. sucked, but there was no way to save here.. But what was Carlos guy thinking to come to NY with nothing but new borns? smh. where were his seasoned warriors? where was all that patience he was described having?

- The new dealbetrayal: Man that hurt to read. I like Alice really thought they were her friends. sure they had difference of opinion on blood and behavior but when it came down to it, she had thier back and her thiers.

hmmm to think on it now, I say they had a right to be mad she was leaving. it was selfish of her to just say "thanks" for the good times and bye! knowing full w6she was the lynchpin to those times.

in a way, Alice never understood her race or people. she never took the see that "most" relationships are symbiotic. Each living and using one another to keep themselves strong. And nobody there wants a king or queen who just "takes". (That's the Volts problem)

in the end it was true she had to leave, but she should've explained it better. shouldn't have started out her explanation with a big smile saying thanks for everything but your way leads to death. shouldve shown proper respect and told them in full detail that ther vision just showed all of thier death of her and the volturi ever meet. starting out the way she did made her look like the jackass first, and kind of justified them throwing it back on her.

chi_yang couldve gone without ever mentioning that they were not going to be her friends anymore. at least she would've felt good about still helping them.

But yes Alice has been naive about a great many things. But she wouldn't be Alice if she wasn't!
TrillionSchiffer chapter 7 . 4/6/2019
it's my fault...no... it's my fault...no...its my fault...no it's my fault...no...its my fault. X10
NumberOneMGGfan chapter 24 . 1/3/2019
wow I love your writting! you really made the Cullen's real and so much more dynamic than SM. Where can I find Rogue? hope you're still writing!
jmormont chapter 24 . 11/19/2018
The best
UncrewedCandy29 chapter 24 . 10/19/2018
I know it has been years since you finished this wonderful story. I wanna say that I love it and also I'm wondering if you're ever gonna continue the sequel to this fic? Anyway, kudos for this beautifully written story.
Star 24 chapter 24 . 8/1/2018
Hola ...creo que ha pasado mucho tiempo desde que escribiste la historia y tal vez ni siquiera leas esto... ame crepusculo pero siempre me gusto mas los personajes de alice y jasper eres realmente buena ame tu historia y la manera que escribes. Si tienes mas historias las puedes mandar a: tienes una fan!
hbiweasley chapter 1 . 6/9/2018
where the hell is Rogue? I need it!
Xatch chapter 24 . 4/12/2018
What a fantastic story- I always come back to re-read it every few years. Twilight was the hit book when I was a young teenager and since then I saw how many of the characters (including the protagonists) were never seem very in depth. I /adore/ how your work expands them, how realistic Jasper and Alice's characters feel. I love how you made Esme more than just someone who tags along. Or Carlisle's perfect mix of leader and father. Or the reason why Emmett is constantly happy. You turned Rosalie into a complex, heartbreaking character and I kinda love you for it. I would have loved to see your take on Bella, but alas, it wasn't meant to be.

I think what I especially loved in your fics were the way you seamlessly merged the vampire instincts and lore into the people that they are. I know it has been many many years, but if you were to ever pick up this story again- man. I would love love love to see Jasper's wounds be finally, truly, completely healed by the end of Breaking Dawn.

As for any readers checking the comments, I think I found a file with the original 10 chapters of Rogue! I had to sign up in a site so idk if the direct link will work, but the site seems pretty safe. The latest chapter was also the first one of Midnight Sun, so you can finish Rogue and just pick up on either Midnight Sun or the orginal Twilight books. It's a bit of an open ending, but we do know that Jasper finally healed by the end of the series, even if we won't be able to read it through Kayla's amazing writing style.

Here's the link I found (again, you may need to sign up on the site to gain access to this!): fanfiction/twilight-fanfiction-2016-search-and-find-more-than-152-fanfics/?actiondlattach;attach1024236
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