Continue please I love this story

I salute you trekkie

UpDate

UpDate

i love this story it's really great i do hope you update soon

Not Stop

o que houve com o chap 6?

So close. SO CLOSE.

Keep going!

hey lol yet again great lol except you loaded the chapter twice :D on the same page lol

Malchior - No.

hate you for close/not anymore - a little bit

All over the place - No

mad at you for getting them together- HELL NO!

K. I used to be a major Fanfiction junky and my boyfriend managed to pull me out of it. How? Idfk. Lol. Any way yes it is all over the place but eventualy you will get it and stick to a story line. Don't worry to much. When you find a plot you really like you'll do whatever it takes to keep it. I was the same way. You also seem as though you don't like the BBxRae pairing, if you don't like the pairing DONT Write a stoy about it. But don't start something and not finish. So keep going if that's wrong. Andother thing Fuck malochar or what ever his name is. You don't need anymore drama because it will piss off your readers. And the teasing thing is so not cool. If they are gonna get together keep them at a certan pace with the constant gainig of trust. Don't let them be friends and then get all upset with themselfs and each other in Every chapter. One trust break per story is good. Other than that I love the story. very creative.

lol get together no one to muck em around :D

Please please let Gar and Rae get together! The suspense is killing me! As for Malchior, I don't ming if he comes in the picture but I just hope he doesn't do too much drama to Gar and Rae!

Keep up the good work and please update soon, I love this story! Peace and HAPPY HOLIDAYS! ;)

Yeah. Not again.

But it was a good chapter!

love it! please write more and update soon!