I just began reading this story, and I cant stop! Its AMAZING! please update soon!

i like it.

update, please?

hope you update! :) it has potential!

Gosh this is so beautiful. I just love everything about it, Stella and Joe's distorted relationship, Macy's awkward and cheery attitude, and the way Joe and Nick interact. It's so great. You write everything in such a poetic way, I love it.

AMAZING I LOVE IT

Amazing. Love the angst. Can't wait for an update.

this was totally great im totally for jacy update soon :)

finish please before christmas it was a lovely story and id love 2 see the ending

I hope Nick makes an actual appearance in the next chapter!

Anyways, this is written beautifully; like in a poetic drabble-like way. It's just really amazing. Please update when you can, I'll be patiently waiting!

Ah, I've been waiting for a story written in this manner! So far it looks great ]

I can't wait until the next chapter! :D

Please update soon!

I 3 the plotline.

I was excited when I saw that you updated this, and was even more excited once I read it. This was good, like I expected, but I was sad that Nick hasn't really made an appearance. (I'm a Nick fan y'know.) But other than that, it was great. I really liked Joe's reasoning behind his whole maybe relationship with Stella, because that's always how I imagine he rationalizes it in stories were it doesn't seem completely Joe/Stella. And I like how Macy takes care of Nick. Super sweet. :)

I hope to see an update from you soon, but don't worry too much about. Life tends to get in the way a bit. :P

This so unlike anything I've read here before, but I can assure you that that's a good thing.

This is really interesting and angsty and beautiful, I just can't wait what happens next.

And so I'm guessing that you're changing the rating to M?

That will be interesting. Heheh.

I'm kind of hoping that this will turn out as a Joe/Macy, but it's your call, so...we'll see what happens next.

Update soon! :)

Ah. So, I'm guessing Joe/Stella and Nick/Macy is how this will all spin off? Maybe?

It's really interesting, and I'll be looking forward to a next chapter. :)

I happen to love stories that start in the middle and then work their selves up from the beginning to the end. So that was exciting. Also, your descriptions are great and this whole beginning was just so very very promising. So yes, I hope to see an update from you soon. :)