Hey ho. Razer repeatedly recommends your works in her stories, so I decided to check this one out. And I'm glad I did. This is a really interesting angle on Hwoarang, one that is probably a lot truer to the games yet the one that is least explored on this site at least - less a cliche-ridden tragic figure who's only cold because he needs love and blah blah blah but rather a jaded cynic who knows little of why he is what he is and cares even less. The dialogue is really close to how Hwoarang would actually speak and the words he would say, and is overall a very entertaining story. Shame I don't like Hwoarang that much, but whatever, you still write him expertly. Thumbs up to you.

Great work on this. Nicely done. Keep at it.

I love the way this was opened. So captivating.

~I'm alive and kicking.

~Soon enough he'll be running back to his mama; the mama that I can almost guarantee irons that fancy suit and packs his sack lunch before sending him off with a pat to that spiky head. Tch. - ahaha lol xD

Awesome fic dude. 8D

Wow, some Hwoarang awesomeness! I love his narrative voice as well. Just one thing: "like a murky pool of memories that sometimes reveals the vague silhouette of an image or the echo of a voice". That jarred me. I thought it was pretty inconsistent with the rest of the style. But maybe that's just me )

Me likey anyways! So write about another character, and I'll happily read :)

Happy Writing!

I can really see Hwoarang here. Very good characterization. Boy, is Hwoarang in the surprise of his life after fighting Jin. Great Fic! :)

Tsk, tsk, the poor boy is in for the shock of a lifetime. I like that he was kinda sarcastic throughout the fic as opposed to Angsty!Hwoarang which we've become used to atm XD. Good job again!

NOT BRAIN POOP.

BWAHAHAHA. I BEAT YOU TO IT.

You already know how I feel about this but I'ma say it anyway.

Your Hwoarang is sex. Absolute sex. And aside from sex, he's probably the best Hwo I've ever read. Seriously. Much love for your characterisation. And sexin'.

I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING -mock glare-

bagah.