Epic story thank you...can't wait to read the squal

Very interesting story

I love the chapter but... I can't get over it... the... the hufflepuff blue... baton. Hufflepuff. Blue. N-no. Sweety no lol. I-it, honey it's yellow. EVERYTHING ELSE is beautiful but please change that. Thanks!

Great story thank you for writing it. I'm hoping that the sequel will be updated soon as I'll be reading that as well!

hufflepuff isn't blue , that's ravenclaw

... oh boy.

... hufflepuff blue?

Love it!

Dean you dirtbag

He’s using Harry and it’s making me want to cry

This story has some weird transphobia happening. “He wondered briefly if perhaps one of the ladies was not actually a lady. Dean wasn't sure how he felt about that” implies that not only does dean not see trans women as women, but doesn’t like it. when a character is meant to be likeable and is transphobic or homophobic or any other amount of awful things it makes me suspicious of the author, and if it’s just their ideas being pushed onto these characters .

Not to sound rude or anything but blue is Ravenclaw's color NOT Hufflepuff. Hufflepuff is yellow

Please don't call Deans cock big Dean in a smut scene! It's funny once but it's very un steamy. Just a constructive criticism
I am starting this fics and looks super promising

THANK FUCK! OMG you had me nervous-so good but omfg lol love it XD

Pheonix2k had it right, sorry Rudiger Smoot. Hufflepuff is black and yellow and Ravenclaw is bronze and blue, as well as an eagle, not a raven.