Have you stopped this story? I'd be interested in seeing where it goes.

Whats next, whats next?

I love this! Please update soon!

This is a great story! You should finish it!

I hope you decide to add another chapter! I adore this fic, I think it's great!

So sad you didn't decide to finish this. I love what you have so far and I would love to see who wins the bet, and what happens with Jazz and Prowl.

This is a good story that deserves to be finished. I hope that you do.

I *so* thought of Gibbs with that head slap. I dearly love the way he does that, and the explanations of the various touches he gives his team. Good story so far. Do you know how many chapters are left?

Awesome story! I can't wait to find out what happens next so please update soon!

you know I think I just feel madly in love with you! in the middle of it I was thinking how funny it would be if Ratchet hit Jazz up-side the head like Gibbs from NCIS, and bam~ at the end what do you say Gibbs from NCIS! *rolls around laughing* can't wait for next chapter!(Got to love the Gibbs & Danozo love! they are like brothers! I guess that would make Zeva their angry sister and Abby the adapted sister from down the street!

I love your Ratchet! Makes me all sorts of happy.

As for the main pair... damn you for dragging it out even more!

So now that you've established everything. we gonna get somewhere? Cause I really wanna go somewhere. especially since thus far your Jazz/Prowl interaction has been delightful

can only imagine how good their actual interfacing is going to be (that's cause you haven't posted it yet *pokepoke*)

Oh, you are hardly the only one who has had that problem: here, I'll do a little one shot sexy stuff...and then...PLOT. But I love it!

Some fun touches in this chapter-for some reason I just LOVE that comment about Ratchet wishing he could have the satisfaction of slamming a phone down! And the betting! And the makeover shows!

Haha, that's like me, i had a smut-bunny that grew a massive plot. Right now though i'm having trouble inserting more plot into the smut to keep it from degrading into nothing but cheap mech-porn XD you seem to be having no such trouble, this story is excellent and i'm enjoying it immensely! :D

so sorry to hear about your dog. All the best, Tara

sorry, didn't log in

Sorry about your dog. I love animals and have pets too. I know its hard putting one to sleep due to illness or age. It hurts the same either way, young or old.

Take your time. I look forward to ch 3 when it's ready.

Take care.

Very interesting story. I just love Jazz and Prowl