| Reviews for Bright Grass |
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NACHOIMG chapter 7 . 1/23/2011 Do as you please, it's your story and I have enjoy it so far, wharever you think it's going to make it better well I just have to say that I'm excited to see what you are gonna come up with. |
Darkwolve chapter 7 . 1/23/2011 I think you should do it as you prefer: restarting it with a plot in mind or continu it and trying to find a plot to fit in. |
Nebelkind chapter 7 . 1/20/2011 I think your idea wasn't bad. Thought it had a lot Jack angst in it... and the spirit gang didn't really put much effort into their task... ...well... I don't really have all that great ideas... just that they should show Jack and the shaolin kids that they are playing with really dangerous weapons and teach them a lesson. ... or something like that... 'm looking forward to see what you are going to change! :3 |
Luiz4200 chapter 7 . 1/16/2011 Continue it, please. |
foxfire222 chapter 6 . 12/12/2010 i wish you would update, i'm really digging this story. such a great plot/ i also want to see what will happen next. please update |
AnimeWriterTycoonGirl chapter 6 . 11/11/2010 ...I love Hiei and Kurama! You better continue or i will cry! you wouldnt want that would you? :'( |
random bug chapter 6 . 8/11/2010 i think hiei or yuuska with jack would be cute and i so far like the plot as weel keep it out is is one of the best jack ones i have read so far thank you |
Deathangel499297 chapter 6 . 6/29/2010 YAY! New Chapter! I'm So HAPPY! |
NACHOIMG chapter 6 . 6/29/2010 I will be very straight forward... this is by far your best up till now, I loved the jack part you made him from a comedy villan to another well developed character and it is awesome. p.s. I got the opportunity and sorry but that thing of omi not doing stupid things because of his ego it's not right actually he made a lot of stupid decisions because of his ego and wishing to prove himself above others, so again sorry for the bad info. |
KuwabaraMikey17 chapter 6 . 6/27/2010 I love it! I got questions 1. Is Hiei and Kurama joining the Xialin warriors? Is Kuwabara and Yusuke going to be on Wuya's side? or is it vice versa? |
Luiz4200 chapter 6 . 6/26/2010 Did Hiei and Kurama join the Xiaolin for good? Please update. |
Luiz4200 chapter 5 . 5/17/2010 Will anyone tell Koenma? Is anyone of the temple aware of the Spiritual World? Please update. |
LatyfeSurLeSora chapter 5 . 5/15/2010 Yay more! I need another one. I hope you update soon. |
Nebelkind chapter 5 . 5/12/2010 Are they going to the shaolin fighters? I think Kurama should have asked why Jack wants the artefacts... after all it's an important question.. |
NACHOIMG chapter 5 . 5/11/2010 this chapter was good but why would Jack be so honest to them? but that's my only problem and easily overlooked it was good, and I also think is a good idea to get Jack to train with Yuske. |