Reviews for Bright Grass
NACHOIMG chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
Do as you please, it's your story and I have enjoy it so far, wharever you think it's going to make it better well I just have to say that I'm excited to see what you are gonna come up with.
Darkwolve chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
I think you should do it as you prefer: restarting it with a plot in mind or continu it and trying to find a plot to fit in.
Nebelkind chapter 7 . 1/20/2011
I think your idea wasn't bad.

Thought it had a lot Jack angst in it... and the spirit gang didn't really put much effort into their task...

...well... I don't really have all that great ideas...

just that they should show Jack and the shaolin kids that they are playing with really dangerous weapons and teach them a lesson. ... or something like that...

'm looking forward to see what you are going to change!

:3
Luiz4200 chapter 7 . 1/16/2011
Continue it, please.
foxfire222 chapter 6 . 12/12/2010
i wish you would update, i'm really digging this story. such a great plot/ i also want to see what will happen next. please update
AnimeWriterTycoonGirl chapter 6 . 11/11/2010
...I love Hiei and Kurama! You better continue or i will cry! you wouldnt want that would you? :'(
random bug chapter 6 . 8/11/2010
i think hiei or yuuska with jack would be cute and i so far like the plot as weel keep it out is is one of the best jack ones i have read so far thank you
Deathangel499297 chapter 6 . 6/29/2010
YAY!

New Chapter!

I'm So HAPPY!
NACHOIMG chapter 6 . 6/29/2010
I will be very straight forward... this is by far your best up till now, I loved the jack part you made him from a comedy villan to another well developed character and it is awesome.

p.s. I got the opportunity and sorry but that thing of omi not doing stupid things because of his ego it's not right actually he made a lot of stupid decisions because of his ego and wishing to prove himself above others, so again sorry for the bad info.
KuwabaraMikey17 chapter 6 . 6/27/2010
I love it! I got questions 1. Is Hiei and Kurama joining the Xialin warriors? Is Kuwabara and Yusuke going to be on Wuya's side? or is it vice versa?
Luiz4200 chapter 6 . 6/26/2010
Did Hiei and Kurama join the Xiaolin for good? Please update.
Luiz4200 chapter 5 . 5/17/2010
Will anyone tell Koenma? Is anyone of the temple aware of the Spiritual World? Please update.
LatyfeSurLeSora chapter 5 . 5/15/2010
Yay more! I need another one. I hope you update soon.
Nebelkind chapter 5 . 5/12/2010
Are they going to the shaolin fighters?

I think Kurama should have asked why Jack wants the artefacts... after all it's an important question..
NACHOIMG chapter 5 . 5/11/2010
this chapter was good but why would Jack be so honest to them?

but that's my only problem and easily overlooked it was good, and I also think is a good idea to get Jack to train with Yuske.
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