Oh man, heartbreaking on all counts.

Wow! This story was lovely. I mean, it was very beliavable! The story about the fifty dead and Copernicus was great! :)

Wonderfully written. I, too, imagined something similar to this when I read about McCoy's protests in the TMP novelization. You captured the characters' personalities really well.

I love it, great job!

Wow...so much emotion was packed into just those last sentences alone...*sighs* beautiful, and I await more

Spirk-shippers unite~!

This is an excellent start. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Break my heart now...I never thought "what if Bones opposed the promotion?"...but you just opened the door-thanks! More please?:)

nice job i wish jim didnt become admiral and if eel bad for him but great job i cant wait to see the enxt part