| Reviews for Not The Half Blood Prince |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 9/25 Di |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/25 Du |
 Zile0 chapter 9 . 9/12 Well done |
| fantasyinmymind chapter 9 . 9/3 Mmmm...what an interesting use of the Dark Mark. |
| Saissa chapter 9 . 5/20 UM this was OK but Harry is far too forgiving and Hermione is way to logical to be able to love anyone - IMO! Harry reaslly should have said NO to taking Hermione back. And while you didnt like the plot holes in the books - How convenient that you create an underground mansion that the Potters could have hidden in on Halloween night in 1981. So why didnt they? You did not answer that question at all. That underground mansion is called an ex-deus-machina - something that JKR used all the time in all of those books. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/18 I’ve read it all. This had the makings of a very good revenge Harry story. It was ok until you decided he’d forgive Hermione straight away. After that the story kind of tailed away and ended very quickly |
| UnknownVoid25 chapter 4 . 4/20 I stopped reading up till this chapter because this isn't Hermione, but a very annoying bitch |
| Kira Potter Jackson chapter 9 . 2/10 How immersing the purple thread. Kira |
| Kira Potter Jackson chapter 6 . 2/10 It seems that Harry can't take a bath. Kira |
| Kira Potter Jackson chapter 3 . 2/9 How many questions Harry's. What a beautiful description of the farm. Kira |
| tyrannicpuppy chapter 9 . 12/18/2019 Far too much tell not show. A first half almost completely angst despite it not being tagged as such in any way. Definitely my least favourite of your works to date. |
| tyrannicpuppy chapter 4 . 12/18/2019 You could have tagged the story as angst given we're almost halfway through and so far that's been all it's consisted of. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/24/2019 So Hermione straight up lied to Harry. She didn't push Harry away because she was afraid of being heartbroken by him. She pushed him away because she didn't have faith that he'd survive. She said so in the previous fucking chapter. She also said so in chapter 1 of this shitshow. So why did you change her reasons? Why did she make it seem like Harry's fault? The blames, fears, and insecurities lay squarely on her. So either she lied, or you changed her reasoning because you can't handle her actually being 100 percent wrong. Either way, go fuck yourself. Its no wonder your wife cheated on you. Bet you liked it when so sucked and fucked another man in your bed. Because she sure as hell didn't write this shit. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/24/2019 I hope the actual author of this, the husband of broomstick, actually kills himself. This type of shit is so mediocre that it's no wonder his wife cheated on him. A mediocre story written by a mediocre cocksucking cuck. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/18/2019 Harry forgave Hermione way too quickly. |
