i like it even though they left each other thinking that the other hated him/her they still loved each other but found out the hard way

aww, i liked it. imma lovin chels and vaults right now. they are the coolest hm couple. i like dah way ppl make stories up about them, cuz in the games its not dramatic enough and they are waaaaaay too goody goody for me to enjoy. so i always write about them with a tiny twist.

back to the story, i really enjoyed it. poor chels and vaults... i like mark but sabrina does my HEAD in. so i dont mind yhuu makin vaults cheat.

Luv PSBH Xox xoX

i liked it but i want it to have more words were they divorce and then remarried but Sabrina's dad will kill him

That was brill! I loved it! ITS NOT FAIR! Why did he have to marry that cow! WHY? I wish they could've been together! You're an amazing author!

aw so sad :(

That was such a sweet fanfic! I h8 Sabrina! XO I love Vaughn!

Sabrina Gr!

Vaughn Yay!

Sabrina Gr!

Vaughn Yay!

you have my 1st review

it is my honour to bestow upon you-

Oh!Chocolate! See ya!

That was wack man. but idont know.

Def. LOVED IT! It was so KAWAII!

Not only does the couple not marry each other, but it was so tragic that they realized that they loved each other AFTER they married someone else! SO TRAGIC! And I loved it!

And secret meetings! Dancing till midnight! AHH! You can't get better than that!

VERY AMAZING, a job well done! )

~Shadowed-Wolfe

Sad, but also adorable. Good Job automatic fav!

This isn't weird, its just different. But I like it :D

Not weird, not Fcked up, just one-of-a-kind :D lol.

aw... T.T that's so sad! (but I like it :D) you should make this into a multichapter story! its a really good idea! I wish I had this idea... I wanted to write a multichapter, but all my ideas are for oneshots. -.-' anyhow~ I loved it! :) write more soon!