wow *sigh* that was a really great story, interesting, exciting, dramatic and full of emotions really good work *thumbs up and cookies for you* _v

Amazing Story! Conclude was perfectly satisfying. I'm not really a fan of Jarper, but the way you put it was totally great. I might be reconsidering to be a Jarper fan now... Again, Keep up the Great Work!

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I just started reading this and love the idea so much!

Omg. Amazing. Story. Right. Here. You had me in suspense throughout the whole story. Can there be a sequel? Though I guess it has eended where it had to. I'd have loved to see their parent's reactions though. Anyway, this is really original, and s beautiful. I love it :)

Really good story

I can honestly say that this is the greatest fanfiction I've ever read! :)

Omg I couldnt stop crying in this chapter! You write really go stories

Okay, I've read a lot of stories in fanfiction over the years for many different topics of different lengths and of different degrees of skill, but this story, I can truthfuly say is the best story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. It all fits together so seamlessly and wonderfully, with twist and turns and I absolutely loved it. Well done. Bravo, and may you know that you have an extreme talent that captured my attention from the first chapter. I love that you kept Alex alive, and the emotion leading up to that actually made me cry. And it's okay that it took a long time because it really shows that good things come to those who wait. Once again, great job

You made me cry so many times. Every memory chapter and a few other parts. This is the best Fanfiction I have ever read, thank you for sharing it. You're a talented writer, keep up the amazing work :)

WOW. There are so few really good WOWP stories, especially ones that don't involve insect. This is definitely one of the BEST. I love it. It's so creepy, and sad, but funny and kind of beautiful at the same time. You do a great job of setting up that atmosphere throughout the story, even though the times and locations change. Sometimes having flashbacks throughout a story can make it feel disjointed, but I think it works perfectly in this story. I love the feeling that this was building up to something big, and your finale did not disappoint. Bringing Alex back to life was a nice touch as well- I assumed she would be well and truly dead in the end.

I think my favorite part of this story is the characterization. Even though the characters have been inevitably changed, they still feel in-character. And you describe everything perfectly. I could feel their sadness, their despair, tiredness, happiness, everything. Thank you for a great read. I wish you would write more WOWP fics!

That was the best story ever! Especially the ending! I love the brother\sister moments of WoWP and you totally capyured that! This is definitely one of my fav. stories! :)

This was an amazing story! I loved it. It had me crying so much on the flashback chapters and when I thought Alex was really saying her last goodbyes. You are an amazing writer. I recommend making up your own characters and a reason that they have powers and writing this as an actual book. I know that I would read it. Keep up the amazing work! And I can't wait to read another Max and Alex (no romance; one like this) story!

I loved it. Your style of writing is unique and slightly depressing but that's where you were trying to go with the story so its understandable. I was really starting to hate Alex towards the middle, dispit her being my favirote character, but her bitchyness was explained. Other than the awsomeness of your story I was wondering about the baby. You said how Alex was preserved because of the spell and in the 7 months later there was no mention of the baby. I'm assuming that it just died but I'm crurious to what you have to say. Again, awsome story.

I can't tell you how long I've been looking for a story based around Jake, as well as Alex, as well as Justin and as well as Harper. And to make it better, this story was a Tragedy with some comedy which is my favourite! This story had me hooked every since the first paragraph of the first chapter, I really felt Jake's pain throughout the whole story and I found myself watching it as a film in my head which was even better, especially the part where they look at Alex's corpse and when Jake would stay up in his room with the TV on. Oh I'm chatting rubbish now but I cannot get over how well put together this story is, it didn't lose plot like other stories. Thankyou for writing this, you've kept me up till five o'clock in the morning to read it so well done haha! I hope you write more WOWP stories soon, you're very good at them!

I actually read the whole story in october,but. At the time I didn't have a user here so i couldnt review it ,so here it comes, (a bit late though) B I have never cried so much while reading any story,you made the whole story breath taking and amazing and I have no cons to give you whatsoever All I. Can actually only say is a big fat THANK YOU for writing something so truthfully amazing