Cute! I love when they grow up together and I'm a sucker for happy endings (: thanks!

That was amazing! Lol i loved it!

O.O A-amazing... I'm shocked... That was perfect!

I loved this story so much! The fire analogies were perfect! As a fellow fanfiction writer, i applaud you and wish that my work was half as good as this! keep on writing these amazing works of art!

Awesome cute story XD

It was very sweet. People should do stories like that more often.

Oh my god, that was "pretty fuckin' incredible"! It's so beautiful!
And Axel all like "Sure thing I blew up your families house! What else should I do all day?" was hilarious!
Great job!

it was supppper cutte

fro some reason i have never read better shit than this... you fucking rock at writing yaoi

"Babe. There's a pyromaniac tending ours. We're fine."

XD I think this was my favorite line in the entire story. On another note, this was excellent. It was adorable, there was humor woven all through it, and it was A-FREAKING-DORABLE. X3

SO faving this.

That was cute if only evryone could be that happy

D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWE. I DIED. THAT WAS ADORABLE.

Weird how they ended up together, but I wuuuuved it~

And you write AkuRoku too? :DDDD happyyyy! this is going my Axel/Roxas community if that's okay :D I'll be looking out for more from you!

lol, REALLY GOOD! that was an amazin-...no! astounding story!

This is actually one of my favorite pairings ever. There was always something about that red-head and Roxas that always made me consider the possibility of more between them. I've actually never really read much fanfiction on these two, for the Kingdom Hearts fandom is extremely huge, and it's hard to find good quality stories at times, with the balance of a well-written plot and romance I like.

This however, takes the cake. I happened upon your profile, for you left me one of the kindest reviews to my own Clephiroth drabble, and as I was on my way to message my gratitude, I stumbled upon this treasure. Every friend of mine who loves this pairing will most certainly be linked to this story by me. _

I loved the intimacy this couple had, the AU you masterfully created, and how there was a balance of humor, slight angst and this beautiful romance. If I could draw at all, I'd re-create the scene where they kissed at the fire.

This was my favorite line: "I'm serious, Rox, just listen. A fire, when it sparks, is absolutely fuckin' gorgeous. How it dies out or lasts depends on how you take care of it. Either you pay careful attention to your amount of tinder and that fire keeps going beautifully, bright and colorful with all the flames licking up at the sky, sparks shooting off. But when you leave it and don't feed it, it begins to wither and die down, smaller and smaller and losing luster… until it's just gone, and you're left with ashes." I love fire analogies and weaving the theme of fire into my own works, and this worked beautifully with this story.

Terrific job! _

~Luna