Oh so sweet thanks for the very good read

This was great BUT...we went from the family aspect to the couple's hot moments...I think this should have beenn two seperate stories.

oh wow, i love this story! I've read it a bunch of times, can't get anough, so just wondering and hoping you will update this soon? (smiling hopefuly) :0)

WOW

I love it

yummy! i so loved it!

xxRosaxx

And now for the nice naughty scene :-)

This story flows along really well; I like the idea of Patrick in handcuffs.

He definitely had a good present!

You HINT at something else though, that I would challenge you to back up with another story:

" ‘Focus Tess,’ she thought to herself. ‘This is about him; don’t let him turn the tables on you like he usually does.’ " - implies times when he has done things that have been about her and not just about him like this one... make a girl happy and write about some of *those* times!

To wrap up (oh, bad pun), looks like his present was definitely a good new memory for him for Christmas :-)

Since you were so kind to take a look at my story I thought I'd give this one a whirl...

The first few lines... certainly do make it sound like they are discussing something DIFFERENT from placing a large Christmas tree on the car! Well done!

It would be interesting if you went back and filled in the missing time in their lives when Jane wasn't there to see Ben's early years... but I can definitely feel Patrick's melancholy at missing those years...

The scene at the end: Nice promise of some fun naughtiness :-)

:) iread both chapters! i love it!

xxRosaxx