Great stories so far, but what's with the bold font in this one?

The boss battle was over in a single sentence. That's not interesting at all. Disappointed once again.

It seems you are not moving forward as you write more. You are still in the same place that you were when you had started.

I'm out. Sorry. :(

Still suffering from 'Lack of Description Syndrome".

So...the Cheif has seen a young boy with a yellow mouse and a blue alien before? He's been around the block a couple of time then.

Ha Ha. Sorry.

Another world that Disney and Squre Enix neglected. If no plot starts soon, I'm giving up...sorry.

How cheesy. *holds hand to heart* I'm not feeling the love.

That was not much of a boss battle. There was no battle. He just...

Matt: *blasts Cruella* I win, bizz-nitch.

And that was it. Very disappointing.

There's something else that I noticed now. Actually two things. One, there is a lack of description. There is really only dialogue. And you did not describe Matt. The only reason that I know what he looks like is because his description is on your profile. Not everyone is going to know that.

Second, you work well with the Eglish language. Your grammar is great. I csan understand you. That kind of detail to the rules of writing is hard to come by.

For that, I appluad you.

There's something that I noticed. There seems to be a big gaping hole where the plot should be. Your not giving any kind of indications of what is going on. Just saying.

Maybe I'm missing something. *shrugs* Onward!

How does Lucky deal with all the manhandling? He's like pulled this way and pulled that way. All over the place.

moving on.

She wants to make them into coats! Matt must stop her. I have to say though, I'm a sucker for characters with plain names. It makes it so they don't have to live up to anything super special. It'll give them room to grow.

moving on.

101 Dalmations? That's a first. Your chapters are short. Boo. Wished they were longer.

Moving on.

Your story has caught my attention for the longest time. I'm actually going to sit and read it now. Maybe I'll be surprised. Like you, I love Stitch, too. Though in my story, he had a lesser role than I had originally planned. Hopefully, you are as good as I'm assuming you are. Lots of people seem to be drawn to you.

It seems fate wants me to read you epic. I believe this is the first one? I'll soon find out. I'll be reviewing every chapter.

Can't wait. *rubs hand together* Surprise me!

cool story poor Laura

The road so far...(begins playing the song Carry on my Wayward Son).