Brilliant! Loved it!

Wow that was so kinky were u get dat brains. Any way I need to know if a chapter 2 is comin . It goin good

I loved this short story!

I enjoyed this story and I'm surprised that I've never read it before. I wish it were longer because I would've liked to read some more. I'm curious about what caused into to succumb to his beast & why was he after Kagome in the beginning (did he not have his sword, was he trying to kill her or rape her?)..? I also can't help but wonder what was going on in Sessh's mind, I'd love to know why he basically kidnapped her, took her to his home & forced her to be his sex slave. I mean he kinda/sorta raped her by taking her against her will, tying her up & forcibly taking her virginity, but I know some would say that he also seduced her in a way... I don't know, I'd love to know what his P.O.V. was, because he did refer to her as 'his captive obsession'. Did it mean he'd been obsessed with her for a while & instead of giving her a 'choice' to get to know him (in more of a human way?), he chose to go about it in a youkai way (like, he's 'Sesshomaru, Lord of the Western Lands' & he wanted her & took the opportunity to take her?). In that era 'human' women didn't have much choice, I can only imagine how youkai chose their females...?

That was an AWESOME LEMON!

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! OMG THAT WAS SO AMAZING, I WISH THERE WAS MORE!

Well that can be considered rape

Love this story XD reread it soooo many time :P lol

This. Is. Amazing!

Keep up the amazingness

OMG that's so fucking HOT. I'm so interested in trying this little one out. lol

I loved your story! Will you be doing another chapter?

this is my favourite sex story ever

oh lordy (fans self) what i wouldn't give to have Sesshoumaru wash me ;)

wow!

what else can i say...

Very nice work