This is a really great story so far, i think you should keep going writing it! I love the idea of the story and you are really great writer!

good job on your stories

Omg! This is gettin so good! I love it! Cliffhanger cliffhanger cliffhanger! Update soon

If I was Bella I would if worn jeans a hoodie and flip flops. Lol just to make Edward mad lol. That would be funny.

Oh Edward y? I would of slapped him if I was her. Slapped him so hard!

Ugh Edwar such a jerk? Don't donut Edward!

good update

hmmm more i wouldnt mind they being couple, just hope she dosent get hurt in the end )..

Good job Bella! I am so proud! So proud! The nerve of Edward, bein rude to her one day and asking her out the next. Ha! This should bring down his ego a lil bit.

Wow he offered to help her up? That's new. Lol. Oh the cliffhanger. What did the note say?

I love ke$ha! Just sayin. Poor Bella she's been through so much. So sad.

I was expecting mike to be in love w Bella. I'm shocked that he's such a jerk to her. I loved when she popped his ball and gave it back to him. Priceless

Uh oh this sounds like trouble. Watch out Bella Edward is on the prowl

Bella's got quite a shock from Edward. Found he was actually a nice guy who got seriously burned by a woman named Tanya. Also that there is electricity between them when they touch. Bella is not immune to Edward's persuasive powers. She's just like any other woman when it comes to him. Had a lot to talk about and in common. Looking forward to the future chapters.

please update soon!

i think the plot is pure brilliance!

i really want to know what happens...

update ASAP

E.C.B.H.