You've done a good job of keeping the tone of things. By tone, I mean the banter and rhythm that makes the show a comedy. I like Jack and Karen together but I don't really see them getting it on in this way. I also want to point out that when you're using "and" in a sentence, you normally use "and" and not "&".

the end was so funny! i loved it!

I love your style! You really hit the Will & Grace mood, and there is no greater couple like Karen & Jack! Please continue ...

HAHAHAHAHAHA I have to type really fast or this popsicle will fall outta my mouth, but that was hilarious! You're really good at humor!

I can't wait for more!

lolololol! Love it!

Hahaha! I laughed out loud at this chapter. Great update! I love the Jack/Karen pairing! I can't wait to see where this goes. Please update soon!

Hahahahhahhahha You made my day. lol

The last few lines made me smile so much! I love this! Can't wait for more!

hahaha! You must continue this! JK are awesome!

Oh! I like this! Very cute! You're writing technique is really great. Please update soon!