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OMG I THOUGHT YOUR PEN NAME WAS FAMILIAR!

I read about two thirds of this story, I think. Then I fell asleep b/c I had school, but then someone updated the next day and I got distracted. XD

Ah... Good to know I'm not the only person who loves Arturo. You just gotta dig those wings, ya know? All green and yellow and smokey like... And then there is his voice *lovesick sigh*

Anyways, good story, I'll finish reading it when I get the time. :D

Ah, yes. That song will be stuck in my head forever now "Tis a gift to be simple, tis a gift to be free, tis a gift to come down where you want to be" I love that song. ;)

So. So far, better than most OC fics I see. And u have absolutely no idea HOW FREAKIN long I've been looking for something good with Arturo Plateado in it (Arturo... Only Bleach character I can draw w/out ref material... And the character w/ the smexiest dub voice EVER).

It seems this is mainly Grimmjow x OC though. That understandable. Nobody looks for the "lame video game exclusive character"... No everyone wants smexy smexy Sexta Espada Grimmjow...

Hmm. Done with point rant now lol xD

This is an amazing Grimmjow x OC story…Definitely one of the best that I've read so far.

You have amazing skill with details and scene transitions, as well as just your entire plot line. It was actually pretty different, because, other than this one, I haven't really read any other Grimmjow fanfics where he falls in love with one of his fraction. So it was a nice change from the usual fanfics that I've read.

I absolutely loved your character of Kamiki; her personality traits were just so unique! I enjoyed how you made her have more humanoid feelings and experiences than other Arrancar would have. It gave her something that really set her apart from the others, and, even though that might have been rather hard to write (because it's someone who's rather kindhearted put in a place with all these killing machines), you pulled it off flawlessly.

Also, I really liked the first few chapters of Sinsonte, where you described her life as a hollow. No other fanfic that I've read had included that, and it was definitely one of my favorite bits. I also liked how you made her only eat other hollows for energy, but never any innocent wholes. For a hollow, she really has a good set of morals, and quite a strong will, from what I can gather.

This story was pure awesomeness, and I especially loved the way that you ended it, with the two of them meeting each other, once again, in a totally different dimension. In case you didn't automatically assume this, this story is totally going on my favs list.

The one thing that I wish could have been written out was a sort of "conclusion" to Arturo's plotting. I think that you just sort of left that as an open-ended thing, so giving us an ending, even if it is short, to his plans would have been much appreciated. Other than that, your story was pretty much perfect…Great job!

This satory HAS to be the best story I've ever read in my entire life! Thank you sooo very much for being the second one in reviewing my story oh and you are awesome for Making an Grimmjow story because he is ssssuuuuppppeeerrrr HOT and he's totally mine...you're awesome

Wow ur story is soo awesome can you please please please write a sequel. That would be sooo such a good writer that i would hate to see your talent go to waste by not writing more.

Really good story.

I loved this. It had just the right amount of romance, sarcasm, discovery and remorse. Plus the portion with Luppi taking grimmjow's tower was hilarious. Keep it up!

You should write a sequel! That would be great! I hope you will! Please! An ice cream sundae with cherries on top!

I loved this story and I really hope you consider writing a sequel. If you don't know what to do or need help I will gladly help. Please write a sequel!

I would love to see Kamiki and maybe Grimmjow become Soul Reapers. I would love to know if you would do that. I hope you write the sequel!

Did I mention I hope you will write a sequel?

I'm soooo happy this isn't the last chapter!

I love the story so far. Please write the next chapter. Write more fanficstions.

-The Great Sage

Man oh man! Why do you have to leave it on a cliff hanger! I'm glad you got it updated though. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update Soon!

-o- AWESOMENESS!X3

plz write more of ur story i luv it

NO...O...O! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! D