Reviews for On Rye
Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
An utterly wonderful snatch of an ordinary day in the life of the team. The dialogue and characterizations are both spot-on and entertaining. Thanks for sharing this with us!
alix33 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
"but she hates sun-dried tomatoes like they backed over her puppy." - I feel that way about zucchini and avocado and mango and eggplant.

"Now we just have to let Ducky we found out with guile and cunning," - "let Ducky know we found"?
Annie's Collar chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
A cute story! I love the interaction between Tony and McGee.
PeanutTree chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Heehee! I liked McGee's voice in this story.
Foxtail-Padfoot chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Ohmigod I love it.
Bundibird chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
hee! that was fun! i love it. :)
flyergrad09 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
This was too funny! Poor McGee, he doesn't even like pickles!
beyondtired chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
That was hilarious! It was so nice to see friendly teasing instead of mean-spirited sniping. And how awesome for Tony to show off his smarts while still being Tony. My favorite line, "Tony raised an eyebrow. “Thank you, Lieutenant Peters, for your unpleasant but timely demise?”

Excellent story.
Azamiko chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Very fun. I loved the movie adaptation of Much Ado...
MissJayne chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Loved it! Very amusing and in character.
timewalker05 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
You know, sometimes the "slice of life" fics are simply the best. A chance to see our favorite characters in a relaxed setting just "being themselves." Good job on doing just that.