| Reviews for Fooly Cooly Redemption |
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   Austin Ga Kill chapter 2 . 4/9/2014 Thanks for the warning |
| TheScorpion0081 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012 Interesting... |
| B chapter 1 . 4/26/2011 I liked the story but hated the style of writing. Plus too many OCs. A good fanfic doesn't introduce too many characters that arnt from the story. Unless ur basing it on something else like 20 years in the future. Looking forward to session two but in the mean time take a writing course because the writing was like a middle school kids. Not a fan. Srry I think I put this one on death note |
| diegofu chapter 6 . 1/12/2011 HELL YEAH Y ENJOY THIS SEASONS AS MUCH AS THE REAL SERIES AND I WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT SEASON AND I WILL READ EVERY STORY YOU WROTE UNTIL NOW MEAN YOU KNOW HOW TO WRITE KEEP ON WRITING MEN |
| diegofu chapter 4 . 12/2/2010 hey yo mwn this is realty a good story pleas continiit an endit properly an not whith a simple bullshit finale |
| diegofu chapter 2 . 12/2/2010 men veryveryveryvery exelent men this is the kind of story that some one is searching after the end of FLCL pleas continiu writing and end this story properly PSD yes y dont write prety well |
| KurktheGamer chapter 2 . 6/2/2010 Okay, I'll admit, Haruko's entrance made me smile and laugh. but you misspelled her name once on the same line. Good story though. |
| Erodama chapter 1 . 12/13/2009 Nice, but a few things are wrong, Raharu is mortal enemies with Atomisk and wants his power for herself. |
| Kisarafox chapter 2 . 12/4/2009 Hm...why is eveything underlined? I can't exactly enjoy the story if there are lines in the way and everything is freaking bolded! very good though but i see no improvements... |
| Yokai Moon chapter 1 . 10/20/2009 It seems rushed to me and I can't quite grasp the situation of the story, but over all it seems good. I want to read more if you're willing to add more details to help make the story jump out. Enable ur PM so we can talk more about it later. :3 |
| Kisarafox chapter 1 . 10/14/2009 Okay, let me give it 2 u straight, the story could have been more thought out, you know, give a little more background to what exactly happened three years ago. Give ppl who don't know what FLCL is. And an autors note should come before, you know, being as this is your first story posted on this site. And for the record, u need a disclamer. I don't know why, but it involves the lega stuff. Over all nice story, keep up with the story line and I hope to read more. ~Azure |
| fredisme chapter 1 . 10/11/2009 Interesting! Could be very good. |
