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  milburnmindy chapter 9 . 7/12/2012 Please UPDATE soon love the story wish there was more |
 Shubby4 chapter 9 . 2/20/2012 1. No they shudnt 2. Jasper shud start 3. Later so they can first get to know each other 4. Later 5. No that's a bitch move they shudnt tell lies abt each other 6. Idk 7. No they were assholes to her Btw love ur story :D |
| LA oakRaiders chapter 9 . 2/4/2012 Hey incredible story. please write more! You should make jasper and bella date. |
| shannon chapter 9 . 10/18/2010 noo i dont think they should have an argument, jasper should ask her out, bella should become rosalie and edards friends great stroy by the way :) |
| diva9075 chapter 9 . 7/16/2010 NO dont make bella and roslyn have a big argument! its not fair! jasper should ask bella out DEFINETLY MAKE JASPER AND BELLA DATE SOONER! SAME WITH JACOB AND ROSLYN MAKE THEM DATE SOONER! no they shouldnt do that to eachother :) yes she should dump him no she should befreind rosalie but not edward i love this story cant wait till the next update xoxo mariko |
| feebes86 chapter 9 . 6/10/2010 Bella and Roslyn should not have a blow out... they are best friends and nothing should come between best friends. I think Bella should get together with someone who hasn't bullied her before. Maybe Paul or Embry. Its your story but you asked. |
| MissA540 chapter 9 . 5/29/2010 Okay, here are my answers! 1. No, I don't think that they should have an argument. This story should be against Edward and Crew, no against each other. 2. Bella should definitely ask Jasper out. 3. I think that B&J should date sooner than later. 4. This should be later, because we have to break up Brandon and Roslyn... 5. NO! I DON'T WANT THEM TO HAVE A FALL OUT! 6. No, Roslyn should break up with him at a bonfire thats at La Push, and then Jacob asks her out... 7. Nope. I want more revenge in the story, don't let Bronze&Blonde win! Haha, PM me about specifics... Lexi. |
| mona chapter 9 . 5/29/2010 1. no not good 2.i don't want jasper and bella to date let them date at all and jacob not j hale and b swan yes i think she should befriend them then it maybe can become more with edward this story rules and i love taylor swift...by the way can bella rock more on stage |
| MissA540 chapter 2 . 4/3/2010 LOve this! LExi. |
| THE ONE AND ONLY SAHAJ D chapter 8 . 3/31/2010 JACOB JACOB JACOB JACOB JACOB JACOB JACOB. I have made my point :). x |
| Sara Lautner chapter 1 . 1/4/2010 Awesome! |
| its Critic KbD chapter 5 . 12/30/2009 your story is great && all but theres a problem i thought it was a Bella story not some random character you made up..you should look up Mary Sue && take the quiz not to insult you or anuthing but you might as well change the main character to Roslyn since she is taking all the spotlight like if you went to some chapters you barely hear a peep from Bella and i thought she was the main character. Your giving your own character a bit too much and not the main character herslef this is not for you to take it as an insult or offence but people will like to read about bella not Roslyn if you put bella as the main character |
| AngelsLuvMe chapter 5 . 11/12/2009 PLZ update soon! |
| cyn23 chapter 6 . 11/11/2009 hey, great new chapter, i really like it |
| MyLifeIsEdwardCullen chapter 6 . 11/10/2009 Haha thank you :) u're pretty awesome too lol haha love you x |
