I'm sobbing so hard rn, cause this is the best damn psych fanfic I have ever read. This is total art *cries uncontrollably*

Side note, I know this was published over a decade ago but I just got into Psych and it didn't have all the Shawn whump that I wanted so I came here like any sensible whump lover would. Still, I wasn't expecting a masterpiece like this. I've read over 70 Psych fanfics at this point and this one has got to be my favorite in both portrayal of Shawn (and his ADHD) , and the portrayal of his relationship with his father. Well done senpai.

...wow...that’s the best fic I’ve ever read. Made me cry. Shawn just feeling so alone as helpless saying, “Don’t go!” The FEELS!

And when he couldn’t remember what happened. And when he was still trying to remember how many hats.

Just wow. You’re an amazing author. Thank you for creating this!

I love this! I love how you wrote the flashback scene and then used that in the end

Yes! I love this. This is so Shawn.

This was really great! I loved reading from Shawn's scattered point of view and the ending was sweet. Thanks for writing!

I have to say, this was the most in character and perfectly detailed account from the perspective of the "dying" that I have ever read. Shawn's blinking, scattered thoughts were so compelling, I can't thank you enough for putting this to print. Lovely work.

nice.

A sequel would be fantastic! I'm especially curious about Lassiter's reaction to the shooting considering...

This was a beautiful piece of work...I think that about sums it up :)

Wow... You are an incredibly talented writer. This was so great! By far one of the best psych fanfics I've read! You've got the characters down pat and I was on the edge of my seat the entire time! Very compelling! :) I would love a sequel! :) amazing job! fantastic, seriously! :)

Such a fantastic story. Absolutely love it. You captured them well

Great job. You captured the confusion and disorientation perfectly. Nice characterization. And the tone of piece felt very "Shawn"-like.

Henry needs to embrace his love of Shawn! I will continue to wait for that day, but until then, I shall turn to fanfiction!
Great story, I absolutely love how it's written!

I found your characterization of Shawn very interesting. You did a really great job of portraying both his intelligence and his emotions and feelings.

Great story. I love your use of language, the back-and-forth between flashback and reality. Well done, and I would love to see a sequel!