Reviews for What would have happened: Harry Potter
majobloem chapter 2 . 1/30/2011
nice story ;D Molly's reaction is so hilarious!
barryscaitlinn chapter 2 . 11/23/2009
it wasn't so bad. it was kinda good. :) i just didn't think that Molly would've been okay with that in her house, but whatever, its your story. LOL!
BlaiseLynn chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
Lol, I can't beleive Molly would react like that..But hey, no one said it had to be accurate!
Gemma chapter 2 . 10/26/2009
It most certainly wasn't terrible. Was this your first fic? I think that the last bit of chapter 2 with Molly coming in was very ooc. The sex scenes were ok. Some of the language wasn't brilliant, but overall, it is better than some people do. Keep writing!
Shit balls chapter 2 . 10/9/2009
That was terrible hahahahahahahaha