| Reviews for What would have happened: Harry Potter |
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majobloem chapter 2 . 1/30/2011 nice story ;D Molly's reaction is so hilarious! |
barryscaitlinn chapter 2 . 11/23/2009 it wasn't so bad. it was kinda good. :) i just didn't think that Molly would've been okay with that in her house, but whatever, its your story. LOL! |
BlaiseLynn chapter 2 . 11/4/2009 Lol, I can't beleive Molly would react like that..But hey, no one said it had to be accurate! |
Gemma chapter 2 . 10/26/2009 It most certainly wasn't terrible. Was this your first fic? I think that the last bit of chapter 2 with Molly coming in was very ooc. The sex scenes were ok. Some of the language wasn't brilliant, but overall, it is better than some people do. Keep writing! |
Shit balls chapter 2 . 10/9/2009 That was terrible hahahahahahahaha |