I love this fic but I fucking can't with all this racist bullshit that came with Jacob's sister having dreads. 1 idk if they're still indiginous in thia fic but as indiginous people I can't imagine them coping someone's culture as a fucking aesthetic when they face the same struggle as indiginous people. 2 really? You're just gonna chop up having dreads as hippy shit because of course everyone with dreads are just a bunch of hippies or useless stoners right? 3 Calling the dreads "primitive" when it's a direct link to black people and black culture is extremely racist. Please educate yourself and do better. Also everytime you write about pot use it's obvious that you've never been around pot in your life because you always overexaggerate it and make it cringy and unbeliable. I love the story amd the writing but you need to do your research before writing about something like this again.

Hey there! Hmm, I have a lot I want to say and I'm not so sure where to start. I guess I'll start by saying thank you. Thank you for pouring your heart, soul, and passion into this story. I feel like story is too light of a word, to express the kind of effect it's had on me. This is the first fic I've ever read, and the first novel I've read in a long long time. I don't mean to ramble, but life's been so busy yet dull, and this work has brought me so much feeling. Feelings that I haven't felt in a while. Joy, sadness, pain. Love. I've never really experienced love, not like that, and you write it so beautifully. Maybe I'm being dramatic.
I suppose I must be your newest reader, I found this from a tweet actually, a few days ago. That doesn't really matter though.
Anyways, I guess it's been 6 years since you last wrote. Well, I'm sure you did write. But it's hard, getting an ending just right. Especially hard, saying goodbye. But I'm being presumptuous haha. I won't pester you to update, of course, I would love closure, but it might be too late for that.
Instead, I'd love to express my gratitude.
Thank you! For bringing me, and others, this work. You're an incredibly talented writer. I hope life has treated you well, and I really hope you haven't stopped writing. I hope you wrote an original story like you said, and got it published. If you did, I'd love to read it, so I hope you'll share it's name! And if you didn't, I sure you'll get the chance to, in the future! You've absolutely got the talent, and skill for it. Anyways, thanks again. And hey, I know I said I wouldn't pester about a final chapter, but it's really never too late for an update, haha. You're an awesome person and I wish you the best :)

This is awesome

It's 2018, sometimes i still think about this fic.

More...! I want more!

Update this its really good

I'm a little pissed that this wasn't updated

Hell No! Update!

You know it really sucks that you haven't updated in over 3 years.. about to hit 4 actually. Especially when you talk about how close it is to finishing, just two chapters. Don't even know if you even read or come online anymore but this story is/was amazing. Hopefully you can finish it soon.

Please tell me this isn't the end I loved reading this story I its made me smile cry and its filled me with suspense. Keep going strong

When I first started reading this, I thought that it would be like all the other Jakeward fics. That'd it just be about Jacob and Edward, and how they would fix all the problems they had and have a happy life together.
But now I know that's it's not.

This is now literally my favorite fanfic ever. I love everyone in this fic, because they're all just human beings, who are broken and want to be fixed.
But, I can't love Alec. He's already shattered to pieces.

I seriously wasn't expecting any of this:
Edward, whose real mother died and didn't even want him, causing him to feel like he's a monster.
Jacob, always acting as if he's okay, but when deep down, he had such a suckish childhood and needs someone to help live.
Alice, who had a friend who committed suicide; experienced so much pain that she didn't deserve.
Jasper, whose father abuses him, but has such a wonderful friend that helps him see the light again.
Emmett, who has a dysfunctional life, but still, is one the best friends you could ever find.
Rosalie, whose title is the 'ice queen,' but it only describes, like, one/tenth of her; she likes the attention, since she never got any real love from her family.
Jane, who was so emotionally broken, it caused her to turn into such a bad person. But all she ever wanted was a friend who cared for her. A friend who actually saw her as a human, and not a monster.
And, Alec. I still can't believe he was the one who started the fire. All this time, I thought he was the 'normal' one. But then, the tables were turned, and his whole entire façade fell. I hate him so much.

I cried when I knew what was going to happen to Jane.
When I started reading your A/N, I was hoping that Alec would be the one who was going to die. Never was I ever expecting that it'd be Jane.
I started to think of possibilities of how she could survive a shot to the stomach, but then when I read the last sentence in this chapter, I gave up.
I started to love her character after the chapter before this one. I didn't want her to die.
But she died in her only friend's arms, so it makes it a tiny bit better.

Please continue this fic! I really want to read the last chapter of this beautiful fic.
If you have the time, though.

I hope you get this review.
Sorry for blabbering my feelings to you. I had to get out my thoughts.
Thanks so much! Bye!

Please please update...it's such a beautiful story

Thank you you are a life saver you are the reason why i want to live a thousand years on this earth, Because you brought my lover that was the light of my world back to me just within 48hours. I confess to the whole world that you are great and you are capable of bringing back lost love. Contact on or call him on 2348058176289

This story drags on too much! But over all it's really well written with much detail and a good plot

oh my gosh this is the best thing i've ever read. i should be doing homework and instead i'm going to read this whole thing tonight hahaha ugh . love you so much thank you thank thank you! xxx