Good plot but the writer seems to like child abuse a lot..

I read it all and it was not for me just felt eww while reading it I think it's cause my mind won't let me find this cute or fluffy instead I found it angsty and cringy but that's just me

It's cool but it's so angsty and really couldn't he be atleast 5 or 6 he's so small

I really love this story! The ‘new and revised version’ is amazing! Though I don’t know what the original was like, I’d bet it improved a lot. There is a plot hole that is a little too obvious, as in obvious enough for me to notice it. Archir appears on Mount Doom when his ‘physical body’ is unconscious, there was never really an explanation about that afterwards. But the rest of the story was amazing! You had great spelling, sentence structure, and superb detail. I’d be hard pressed to find another flaw in there.

Loved this story! I think it’s really well written.

Love this story, really happy that I've found it. Ignore the haters for this is fan fiction and not the real thing so should be different. Don't let the muggles get you down!

There is no way Gandalf would know that. He may be a 'wizard' but he doesn't just work like that.

Love your story, and I have for years. In fact, I’m willing to bet that I’ve already left you raving reviews from past accounts that I no longer use. However, my main reason for this comment was to mention that starhoney obviously has mental issues and should not be allowed anywhere near the internet.

This child, (so obviously a child), is using harsh language in the pathetic attempt to sound older, but it’s doing the opposite. The fact that he or she has come so violently unglued because the story failed to go in the direction they wanted makes me doubt the reader’s sanity despite their age.

I guess they’re expecting you to cry with the knowledge that you lost them as a fan, but I doubt you will.

Maybe they should demand their money back, lmao!

Kidding aside... love your story and am reading it again for the millionth time.

Thank you for a very enjoyable chapter.

Thanks for making me cry when he left for the undying lands. (read sarcasm) still it was very good story, and you did well with the character development. I had fun reading this.

HARRY FUCKING SHOULD HAVE CHOSEN ARAGON AND ARWEN AND HIS FRIENDS ! HE'S A FUCKING SELFISH AND A COWARD NOT TO STAY. SO WHAT IF HE LOSES HIS MAGIC AT LEAST IT WAS COMING BACK WHEN HE WAS SEVENTEEN AND WHAT ABOUT HIS LITTLE SISTER?! HE WAS SO HAPPY BUT WHEN HE FOUND OUT THAT HE WAS LOSING HIS PAPA HE TURNED INTO A COWARD IN MY EYES. I WISH I DIDN'T FINISH READING THIS STORY CAUSE NOW IT JUST MADE ME ANGRY. FUCKING COWARD ARCHIC?

I gotta admit I only clicked on this story because of your icon picture... But I read it anyway and its great!

Will Aragorn ever see Archir again?

Where is Eldarion?

Hey!
I like Romeo &,Juliet...