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Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama chapter 1 . 4/17/2012 That is so cute! |
Madame Cross Marian chapter 1 . 3/4/2012 Loved it! Really a beautiful story- who gives a **** about spelling? Please write another like this! |
Magic Kirby chapter 1 . 2/14/2012 To tell the truth the story itself was ok but what really killed it was the misspellings. Usually I don't care about that too much because everyone's human and mistakes happen but when I counted 21 spelling errors with just a glimpse through the story that is way too many especially considering that the fic is only just over 1000 words. I'm not sure if your other five stories are any better but just by correcting most of your spelling errors people will enjoy your stories more and will be more willing to review or read your other stories. |
anime-freak-Lesy chapter 1 . 3/9/2011 i think the 9 tails is in love hehe |
Kyoki no Kage chapter 1 . 1/11/2011 naruto is a girl in this...okay...it kind of helps to understand the story but ... idk this was a good story... i liked how u explained how their converstations went... it was unique in its own way... |
Akumu Nokami chapter 1 . 1/4/2011 Well...I like the way the story is written. I wish you would have somebody fix the spelling and grammar. Also, why is Naruto a girl? Needs a bit of work, but it's an alright one-shot. |
Vaughn Tyler chapter 1 . 11/11/2010 nice |
Evci chapter 1 . 7/14/2010 Loved it ! It was so cute ! |
BadCat7809 chapter 1 . 3/31/2010 nice,I shall now respect your gift,good luck with your other storys! |
donewiththissite chapter 1 . 1/5/2010 Cute oneshot, but you have a lot of spelling mistakes and you have some run-ons. For example, 'glair' is spelled 'glare' and 'sole' is spelled 'soul.' 'Exorcize' is spelled 'exorcise.' Most of these spelling mistakes are mostly words that don't fit the context. Overall, your writing is good. |
Sabaku Sousou chapter 1 . 10/12/2009 i like it. you're a good writer, write more soon! |
AkaSpada97 chapter 1 . 10/11/2009 KAWAII! Kyuubi, can you say... whipped? |
trsofnaruto chapter 1 . 10/10/2009 I like it. short and sweet... But i wish it didn't end there.. You should do a multi chapter of Kyuubi and FemNaru... and they end up together.. you don't see many out there like that :/ |
RogueNya chapter 1 . 10/6/2009 Hehe that was actually kinda cute and interesting. You did good job on it. |