PLEASE CONTINUE

HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE?! This is a amazingly well done story so far, I really hope you finish it one day!

Hmm. This whole story is crazy.
I do wish you could have finished it. But the whole Jan returning from the date then Arde being creepy and her flipping out and going to bed but returning to "mate with him" makes Jan look romantically desperate. That part is kind of ridiculous but I wish you didn't end the story right there so we could see how that all would've concluded.

Ok, I'm in love with this already, so when you update, please make it a nice long chapter, and I have an account on Quotev, so if you ever want to chat, you'll find my name. Please update soon though...

Go Coradee! Tear dat ass up homie!

Please stop sexually assaulting my brain author

Very good story but wye did u just abandon it finish it an bring the story back to life please

It's a shame this isn't being updated..

Very upset this ended where it did...
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But great story commander! -,-/

This is very nice I am exited for the the next chapter Arde sounds funny a lot of times.

Write more

Write more please don't keep us n suspense but so far this is great

WHOA! WHOA! WHOA! Total 180 at the end there!

I do believe that you have been away from this story for four years. Four years! I have come to the following conclusions:
1) you are dead, which is very sad. I'd say that I miss you but I don't know you at all.

2) you are hospitalised. Still sad, but better than dead.

3) you have moved to another site. TRAITOR!

You bastards ! You killed it!