Thanks for updating! Hope to see another one soon! :)

Wtf did she kill herself...?

Oh come on she loves Peeta Gale is EVIL!

Ya im sorry but Gale and Katniss just doesnt work together, its more of a sister/brother relationship, but i guess you can keep dreaming. And maybe you should consider a beta? I mean at your age you should really know how to correctly spell peace and raped, because if you ever want to become an author this is basics and its important. But i wish you all the luck in the world!

Whoa. Talk about rage quit. Intense, dude.

um. I'd recommend you to re-read what you write and do some much needed proof-reading (she was raped, not RAPPED. And by the way? That's not how you want to deal with this actually serious topic). You might want to capitalize your I's, and the character's names. The punctuation is non-existent here and there.

Babies do not grow in stomachs.

It's "must HAVE changed" not must "OF". Again, maybe you could get a beta?

Don't take this the wrong way, but if you want to tell a story you should acquire the necessary instruments to let your inspiration turn into words first. And as this story is now, it's impossible to follow, understand or like.

What? It says its complete. This story is not complete!

good story PLEASE UPDATE

OMG! What happened? Tell me!

Chapter 7!

There are so many typos in this. Try proofreading before posting. Capitalize the starts of sentences. Read your story aloud slowly so you don't miss words and can see where your sentence structure needs improving.

woahh..I can't believe that Snow hypnotized Peeta to rape Katniss...that's just horrible because the real Peeta would NEVER do that to her... I want to cry.

Please update soon, though.

umm who would love gale? echhhh. :((( hate gale

i want a happy, but sad ending, where kat dumps peeta and marries Gale.

What does the happy or sad ending entail? Does she end up with either peeta or gale in either the happy or sad ending? Update soon