| Reviews for Stitches in Time |
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diamondnightskies chapter 1 . 12/5/2019 I really enjoyed this for the most part. Abby was adorable. I feel like this was long enough that you could have taken the time to add a bit more depth to their backstory though. I can definitely understand irrationally trying to save a doomed marriage and him not being able to have her around. But I wish you would have framed it as maybe like a daily struggle of seeing everything he wanted and didn't have leading to the end of his marriage before he was really able to emotionally accept it and know it was for the best, rather than the assumption that he might have ended up cheating on his wife. |
VryUnique chapter 1 . 12/1/2019 Great story. I was worried Bella being rejected wasn’t going to be brought up. It was probably better that they had grown close before it was discussed. Bella had a right to be mad and should have made him suffer more. He made a very selfish decision that really effected her life. What rejecting her meant should have factored more into his decision. It was very very selfish and I’m not sure if he should have been forgiven at all in real life. It said Bella wasn’t accepted for 2 years by Edward and than Bella lost her confidence for 1 year so I’m unsure how long how long it was until she was accepted somewhere. That didn’t make much sense. There are many hospitals and Bella was at the top of her class. There is no reason for her not to be excepted somewhere, even if she had to move. Taking off a year or two would have also looked bad for her future. Thank you so much for sharing. |
MiccaF chapter 1 . 10/7/2019 Absolutely loved this story! |
Babygirl17588 chapter 1 . 8/3/2019 Such a cute little story. I love Abby. |
Agonidzo777 chapter 1 . 3/17/2019 I really love this story, I keep reading it. Thanks... |
wardlyman chapter 1 . 1/2/2019 'No more lies'? Um... what? wHY would she say that line...? I have to commend how you turn EVERY Edward IN ALL of your stories into the asshole or have him be the dick or that one that makes all the mistakes. It's never Bella in your stories. At least you're consistent in that regard even if it's UTTERLY annoying and SHORT sighted. |
heartstrings13 chapter 1 . 10/13/2018 Cute |
Sam 'Dimples' Swarek chapter 1 . 3/7/2018 This was really sweet |
southernpur-rica chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 Absolutely loved this! Wish there was more. |
Valya 001 chapter 1 . 1/22/2018 You write really nice and sweet stories...so far I have loved every single one of them |
PurpleRain27 chapter 1 . 1/20/2018 Lovely story. |
Cool Bananas chapter 1 . 10/6/2017 Such a crack up & a happy tale! thanks |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2017 I love it! |
Nellybean0710 chapter 1 . 2/22/2017 This is a great one shot. I really wish there was more, I would love to see more of their story. |
x AnneCullen x chapter 1 . 2/5/2017 It was such a sweet and beautiful story. Abby was adorable. I loved it immensely. |