I really enjoy reading your stories. It is great work, but I could cry when reading the German parts. Your "German" sentence: "Danke schon seit sparend mein leben." does not make sense. I retranslate it: "Thanks already since economizing my live." The correct German sentence: "Dankeschön, dass Sie mein Leben gerettet haben." If you don't have the letter "ö" use "oe" instead just like "Goethe".

Yes, I enjoyed Mindgames very much. It is well written and I love how you explained the mess with the code names. Well done. Now to your German, if you have the time, can you PLEASE correct it. Write "Jawohl" not "Jawhol". There are a few spellings possible for "Schulz" but it begins with "Sch" every time. I will continue in the next review.

Something I forgot to put in my last review, I wanted to point out how a lot of your characters' thoughts sound more like prose than internal monologue, especially given their length.

I enjoyed Mind Games very much, but there was a constant grammar problem that ate away at a lot of this story's potential. Your verb tense was all over the place. Thoughts/Dialogue ought to be present tense, and everything else in past tense. However, if you are describing a future event in thoughts or dialogue, it would read something like:

"By then, we will have blown up the Hammelburg Bridge."

If it is not a thought or a dialogue, but rather the prose of the story, it would read:

By then, they would have blown up the Hammelburg Bridge.

I'm glad you mentioned these fics, Patti. An excellent read. I hope to read all the stories in the series soon.

Just as fabulous as the first half! Keep up the great work!

GREAT! I love it!

The resistance family, Ohms - very clever. A well written, extremely enjoyable piece. I look foward to more in the future.

(Clapping) EXCELLENT! EXCELLENT! More please, more! I wouldn't mind reading more of the Allied High Command's views on the crazy schemes Hogan comes up with at Stalag 13.

Awwe Shucks, thanks guys! *Sniff* I'm touched! Loved the story too! Say, you know what you could make sound good? A story about a...(Just kidding) You're both wonderful authors and talented people. Thank-you for sharing with us all.

As I have said several times before, this is very well-written. You've managed to fill in a few of the gaps in the show that have puzzled viewers for years. Congrats on a story well-written!

Amazing, intriguing, entertaining, and insightful as usual. This story really does bring a beginning to everything that goes on at Stalag 13, and it is superbly written. I look forward to more additions to the plots that you so carefully allude to in your stories, as well as more information about the characters. I am extremely impressed, and am awaiting more installments with great anticipation. Keep up the great writing!

Very suspensful. I was not expecting the contact to be SS, cannot wait until the second part comes out. Hopefully soon.

Please continue it soon! It's a very powerful story that needs a conclusion. It is very interesting to see several incidents, including the plot itself, that you eluded to in 'End Game' finally come to fruition. I can't wait to see how it turns out.

Brilliant! It's been a while since I read a good book. Seriously though you've written another quality piece with answers to questions that have been confusing viewers for years. Top job.