Please update your story

Um... I have a question. WHEN and WHERE did Edward 'treated Bella badly in the parking lot of Fangtasia' that has the rest of the Cullens pissed off at him? *lol* The ONLY parking lot 'confrontation' they had was last chapter, and all he did was attempt to walk up to her to TRY and talk to her, but all he got to say were THREE words to her before she spun on him, went into a rampaging rant about why she didn't want to listen to ANYTHING he had to say, before hopping onto her bike and riding off, before Edward could say or do anything further past those three words he attempted to say. So exactly how did HE treat HER badly in the parking lot last chapter that's got his family pissed off at him for it? *lol*

Um... at the beginning of the chapter, why is Bella getting pissed off about Edward supposedly STILL trying to control her and tell her what to do like he did back when she was still human, when neither one of them has said ANYTHING to each other until now since the night she revealed who she really was to the Cullens at Fangtasia? *lol* all he was doing was LOOKING at her, he never once said or did anything that was an attempt at 'controlling her' when he saw her on her motorcycle, since she left the Cullen house to go back to Fangtasia before he could even say or do anything that was either insulting or controlling to her. *lol*

Eddie's got to be kidding, if even if Bella WAS willing to 'forgive' him and 'love' him again, he's conveniently forgetting about her PARTNER Sam, who's scent she's probably REEKING of right with his non-human shapeshifter self, now that Edward and the other Cullens should be able to smell seeing how close she was near them, that should be a sign of what kind of 'partner' dear old Sam is to Bella. *lol*

You need to update! :(

this is a really good book if u like really good twisted books bout love action and the lengths someone will go through to be with their true love and what they will go trough to ignore the others attempts

Eric seems very out of character...

He seems almost giddy...please don't take the delicious bad boy away from us...

:P

Anyway, nice story...

kul

Wow! Very good story! I like the way u merge both stories.

1) amazing is the only word to describe your story and i cant wait for you to update and 2) June is a great month but i guess i might only be saying that because my birthday is the 27th lol...good luck on the exams :D

one word...awesome :)

I have been reading this over a few days and have been in heaven! Im a True Blood Junkie and a Twi-hard at the same time and this fed my need for both! I've been looking for a good crossover for a month and landed on yours! The only thing I have been having a hard time with is the size of the paragraphs. When they get too big it makes me want to skip which is never a good thing. Im out of college right now and would love to hear from you. I have taken a few college English courses and would love to un-offically beta your story. Which would be not changing your story but just overviewing it for grammer mistakes and things in that way! Love what your doinig! You have a good talent on your hands keep going!

Interesting story so far. I guess you are not from the U.S. since in one chapter you mentioned it getting colder after February and that's when things start warming up here.

Very nice story.

Where are Sookie and Bill? Why are they not here? And is Bella going to end up with Edward?