Wow, this was a very well written story, and it expressed Crystal's feelings, if I may say, 'crystal clear'-ly! hahah! get it? eh? eh? eh...?
Anyway, the whole story was extremely smooth and moving! Well done!
I can't even think of any cons right now, and only of how beautiful the piece was...seriously!
Keep up the awesomeness!;D

Is this the Crystal from Pokemon Crystal for GBC?

Why the heck does this story not have more reviews?

Anyway, this was excellent! Very bittersweet, I liked it.

Also, I named my female Pikachu Crystal, too!

-PikaBulb :)