The hit would of only been for Shannon or all 3

Ok sooo let ne guess shannon and kelly are gonna be killed just like every other lame fanfic with them in because no seems to have an original story for them nope just kill them off like the show did and move on ugh so annoying!

Tony weeped. Tony wept.
pres. past
keep kept
sweep swept
weep wept.

Tony and Shannon witness a murder, but Shannon is protecting her son. That's motherly devotion for you.

This chapter honestly made me cry. My dad though not in the military has to travel a lot for work and while he isn't gone for years at a time I still miss him. Great job with conveying emotions can't wait to see what's next.

this part is so well written that it made me cry... thank you for sharing your beautiful work.

Nice, but sad.
I dont really like the end, I know it had to happen like that, but I cant make sense of it.
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This story is amazing! You wrote all the characters really well and I found myself laughing or crying through each chapter.

This is a great story so far but I wanted to point out that you changed Tony's middle name. In the beginning of the story it was Anthony Leroy Gibbs and now you have it as Jethro. Just wanted to point that out but it's a good story so far.

DANM U DANM U DANM U! WHYED U KILL EM THEIR THE REASON THIS ITS AU IM MAD CUZ U KILLED EM BUT NOT A BY

THIS CH. WAS SOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD IM CRYING I APPLAUDE YOU AND BOW BE4 UR AWSOMNESS

dont U DARE KILL KELLY AND SHANNON CUZ I WILL DIE WITH THEM

Thanks

PLEASE tell me there's a sequel! I shall check!

I cannot stop crying. I kid you not. They won't stop! This was gut-wrenching, heart warming, and bittersweet. Thank you. Excellent job.