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this was really cute. The only criticism I have is that the last 5 chapters were all boring meetings and other random stuff with no plot or any new exciting stuff. Overall cute but a few problems

Awww! I love Tubby and Red and Greenie and Shala! They are superrr cutee

omg I've been to Headington in Oxford. So have Harry and Hermione gone back in time?

Its Mafalda Hopkirk

I already love this fanfic because of Ron bashing and Potions use by Ron so I can't wait to read it

Thank you for an enjoyable story. And if you ever explore the other potential branching's of this story line, I expect that I'll enjoy them just as much. As for the criticism you mentioned regarding it being "disjointed" I did not find it that way. To paraphrase an author / book reviewer you appear to know. Although it appeared to meander, you find, at the end, that you got from point A to point B by the shortest possible route, and that you hurried.
That said, I dislike commenting on a chapter by chapter basis, specifically because some chapters need to set things up for later, rather than being a complete mini-story, with all the concepts neatly tied up by chapters end.

Thanks again

All in all a quite complex story. It is a little hard to read at times, but the human brain can fill in the gaps quite well. All the dropped letters and blatant misspellings can be overlooked. It is well worth the effort to do so. The flow of the story is awful though. I had to go back at times to figure out when the commentary stopped and the story restarted. Everything is sort of jumbled together with only some space between paragraphs and headings.
No Capital letters.
I loved the journey though. The story seems to have gone its own way. It was fun and interesting.
Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to take cover. Shala is on the horizon. Toodles!

A truly remarkable story!

Liked the idea but about half way through chapter one I gave up. I can't cope with the formatting. Multiple paragraphs run together, line breaks in the middle of sentences. Too much effort to read.

Thanks for an enjoyable story.
It may seem stingy on my part, but I prefer to review based on the completed story, rather than on a chapter by chapter basis.
There are so many interesting concepts melded together that I can see why it was difficult to keep on track.
Thanks for the many references / honorariums to some of my favorite writers.
It looks like I'm a latecomer to your party, so I hope that you still see the reviews.

Thanks again for a narrative of one of the many possible paths for this particular universe.

thank you for reposting the ending. I enjoyed this story.

Great story. I have read this before (either didn’t save it or it didn’t save in my favorites or read a copy of this story) and went searching google with the key words “sorting rings” and finally found this again. Love the healing earth, smart Harry, HarryHermioneLune ship and the different ways to deal with the magical problems. Sometimes it reads as an outline but can’t complain as it’s complete and a lot of detail. Thank you for sharing this story.