Sssooo how many more times do we have to read about them having sex?

Yup I’m a pervy fan girl as well!

best story ever:-)

Nooooo!

i loved this but i wish my F***ING COMPUTER WOULD F***ING WORK SO I COULD F***ING READ IT!

omg when i read that tobi had a brain disorder my friend laughed so hard she cried and i had tah scream to get her to shut up! u r a talented writer!

PREPARE YOUR ASS, KAKUZU?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YYYYAAAAAAAS

That was so funny, just a random kiss, and sasori acts like it never happened, or if he does that all the time!

This is a good story, but loads of stuff doesn't make sense. Like how the heck Pain and Konan room together. No. Any proper school splits boys and girls in dorms. :P

And also, Deidara and Sasori are kinda OOC. I DO like the story though, I just wanted to point this out. :)

That was so creative. Usually the stories I read I don't comment, but this one was amazing! I will be looking for the sequel!
-akatsukirules

Wrong it was the GOOD fairy not the evil fairy. An evil fairy would have encouraged foo foo to hit the female mice and an evil fairy wouldn't give you any more chances.

You are less than 15 too?! Thats great! I thougt ı was the only less than 15 girl who could read smut and Stuff!

Yes! Flamers will explode and insane people like Itachi-sama shall RULE THE WORLD! XD BUAHAHAHAHAHALOLZ!1! (-Reference to a picture on DA (DeviantART) called Naruto: Finally Cracked. :D)

Hand-mouths! XD Hahahahaha! To funny. Anyway, my favorite part is the Hand-mouths scene. XD Hahaha! Hilarious!

Oh my god, this is so cool! _ This has inspired a fantastic story by me that'll be on wattpad sometime soon called, Akatsuki. This story is so cool! Eeee!