OH, Elsie Dinsmore! You have at least the first book, don't deny it, why, this is practically word for word part of the first chapter with the names changed! Let's see...

Edmund- Elsie
Mr. Day- Miss Day
Eustace- Arthur
Jill- Louise
Susan- Lora
Lucy- Enna

ANd of course, Mr. and Mrs. Horace Sr. and Isabel Dinsmore are represented in the forms of Mr. and Mrs. Scrubbs. Hmm, who represents Walter...?

This is very entertaining. Please continue

very interesting, I congratulate you on not using one of those plots that everyone uses hundreds of times ) on another note where you put ~ EEW ~ I know it stands for Edmund's Endless Wait but it looks like EEW as in yuck XD

Seems interesting hope you will update soon :D Pour Edmund, I felt so bad for him...Will we see Narnia ? I'm glad Susan at least tried to defend , if only Peter comeS...

Loved the story;are you still planning on finishing or are you stopping? (please don't end it there 0.o)

interesting story! can't wait for more!

Love it! Edmund is so sweet bless his misunderstood, lonely heart. Can't wait till Peter meets him!

Please update soon!

I can't wait for the next chapter,but I might have to unless you have it up before Tuesday,cause I'm going to Vegas.

Oh! This is brilliant! Do please carry on soon - and can you write a scene where Lucy acts really, really spoilt? Please? You did say she was the spoiled pet of both her father and mother - I'd love to see her act like it! I don't think I've ever read of a spoilt Lucy before! Update soon!

-_-This is really cool! :D Please update soon!-_-

So, I don't know if I get this correctly but Peter doesn't know that he has a brother, does he? I'm curious. 'But when he finally comes, he's not quite what he expected' I wonder...

Poor Ed.

Aww, poor Edmund. This chapter did clear up a lot of things, however, I don't get why Peter was sent to live with another family before his mother died. It was well written, if just a tad fast pace. You might want to consider slowing down the conversations a bit, but its definetly not imperitve. Also, is Christianity going to be a corner stone to this story? I kind of like it, gives Edmund a little more depth, and ties up why Roy might have more of an interest in him *Captian Obvious here, at your service* Hope you always update this soon! (kidding...sorta.. Pretty please?)

This sounds amazing, not that I'm all for Edmund-abuse, but just as long he gets a happy ending with Peter, I'm good. Hope you update soon!

I hate the teacher. He is a bastard, and I hope that Miss Karma makes him pay. I don't like Miss Scrubbs, either. Bitch.

Poor Ed. He is so noble. And it is all so unfair...

The story is great, and the plot too, though.

let's see ,I hate the teacher,but adore the story. I can't wait until you introduce Peter into the story.