| Reviews for The Gloaming |
|---|
  Guest chapter 6 . 12/13/2017 Bella Cullen doesn't have a ring to it does it? It sounds pretty stupid actually. Why change lives and then have Edward worry about bella draining him when bella never really worried about that? |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/13/2017 Do you think that its realistic to have a teenage boy tell another teenage boy that a vampire story is "scary"? Cause I sure as hell don't. It just made for some very weird reading. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/13/2017 not athletic clumsy guys just aren't attractive. I'm out! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2017 you gave Edward bellas life? that's fucking weird. but ok, I will give it a shot! |
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/28/2017 What a crappy ending. I was hoping to get some love |
| barrr chapter 21 . 10/13/2015 I am so late in reviewing this! But, WOW! This has got to be one of my favourite fics! It was just perfect. You wrote so well and kept all of the characters close to the original but different at the same time. Amazing! |
 Gidget922 chapter 21 . 4/8/2015 Wow I so loved reading this story I love you creativeness and turning the pov around xcellent |
| i 3 edward chapter 21 . 11/17/2014 Best fanfic ever I MEAN EVER ,! :-) |
| Comrade'sRoza chapter 21 . 11/17/2014 The ending was a bit abrupt but your story is really good! |
| debslmac chapter 21 . 10/28/2013 Loved this story |
| Toni Masen chapter 21 . 9/4/2013 Renee as Edwards' mother...no no no. I liked Mr and Mrs Newton, nice sensible people, unlike their son! Nice little story. |
| LulaGrace chapter 21 . 8/5/2013 This was a clever flip on the original - it followed the main plot points very closely but contained enough difference to keep it fresh! Thanks for sharing |
| LulaGrace chapter 15 . 8/5/2013 I would have been mad... Don't Edward and Charlie deserve more? |
| LulaGrace chapter 14 . 8/5/2013 I totally think of that commercial, too, when I hear that song! |
| LulaGrace chapter 13 . 8/5/2013 Poor Bella! I'm enjoying this flip |
