Hey, uhmm, Hikami, Ashes, I don't know for sure what to call you (except Ash) but I do know a few things: 1) Story is awesome and funny; 2) Sonic is the ultimate in cool; 3) Virtually NO errors are in the story; 4) UPDATE & 5) I REALLY want that cookie XD

Chapter Rating(s): All chapters: 5/5

Story Status: Faved & Subbed

Author Status: Faved & Subbed

Keep it up! You are AWESOME!

I hope you continue this, as this story is really underrated.

Im adding you to my fav's, no question about it. Now the real question is, will you finish it, or will you cease mid-way like so many others...

Nice! Not bad at all. I got a feeling that pretty soon Tails and Sonic are about to do some epic ass team work. And I bet if Tails just show off some of his skills, Sonic wont have to worry about him so much.

Looks good so far. I'll have to keep my eye on this.

Quick question: Will there be any SonicxAmy or TailsxCream in this?

This sounds really good! I cant wait to read the next chapter, and another thing. I really like the long stories like this. But its up to you if you guys want to keep short or not, I still like the story.

Very intriguing beginning. I’ll be certainly keeping an eye on this one and the fact this is the first review is very weird.

Good luck with the adaption and don’t be afraid to change and expand things. From personal experience I know that platform game novelizations are an exercise of creativity with only loose guidelines.

The characterization really shines through in this story, at least for now. I eagerly expect you to keep the same levels of quality. Tails being my favorite character, I’m glad he seems to be having a major role. People often underestimate his abilities.

I’m expecting you to somehow include power rings, an integral part of the Sonic universe. Personally I favor the ‘power-up’ approach seen in Sonic X and Satam, but feel free to be creative.

The title is fine, but if you want to alter it a bit you could go for something like: ’Advanced Calamity Cubed’, for purely alliteration purposes.

Good job out there!