I like it! Good job keeping the story moving without skimping on the length. And I love how Casey and Derek are working together without fighting or even having to talk about it! Update soon!

I LAV IT!

Good job! I like it, please update soon!

OMG This is so good please please please can you do the next chapter soon i mean its so totally amazing i am totally completely & utterly in luv with it!

It was really good One tiny thing - just checking over the grammer would make it easier to read, but apart from that, it's a good idea and a nice first chapter. :)