I like Bella being feisty but mostly she's just stubborn. So stubborn that she's putting herself and those around her in danger.

Jasper & Emmett are right. Bella always gets what she wants. She whins & complains and generally behaves like a toddler until she does.

Loved it.

The 1st chapter is hilarious!

Well I spent a better part of the day just pouring over this entire story and absolutely LOVED it! It really felt like I was reading an alternate version from Stephenie Meyers herself. Thanks for the great read and I look forward to reading the rest of your stories.

~ Hayley

This story has been very enjoyable to read, hilarious at times and has a great story line.
It's well written

I'm really liking this story except you switch through characters without telling us. It took me forever to figure out whose POV it was in each chapter

love this story so captured the essence of thier characters quite ,did you see that in real life recentlyfeb/2019,rob pattersen and kristen met at a party at a mutal freinds house they starting talking quitely for a ,kristine has been saying to friends ,she will never love another as much as robpatt,hes been saying the same,maybe a reunion? i enjoyed your story so far,please write more next time, just great!

this is really good so far im really enjoying it,thanks

This was an awesome story! Thank you.

Wonderful story. It’s great how the plot developed with Edward staying. I loved every aspect of this story and the perspective of different characters. I truly enjoyed it. Great work.

haha Edward's comment about the writers not having any sisters had me in stitches.

Hahahahaha Emmet got played so hard. Glorious.

Interesting.

So... Charlie finds out about the wedding. You’ve foreshadowed a bit much. Has to happen now.