Very beautiful,your figurative style was so good...
I loved it!

I really enjoyed old Jate stories like yours... Thank you:)
Amazing lovely Jate

I just . . . love this.

) much enjoyed

Very very nice. I read it while listening to Passenger Seat and thought that it was very well constructed with the passages echoing the verses of the song. They're just epic, aren't they? Lovely, keep at it.

Wifey seriously you keep getting better and considering you haven't written for Jate in a long time..it's just genius!

I love all of it, it's brilliant and so so so original. You really capture these two. And you have the best way to describe sexy Jate. Leaving enough for the imagination, but also writing enough to trigger it.

You are so talented.

But you know that, right?

With Love,

Joy

aw, this is perfect! 3

Passenger Seat is DEFINITELY in my top 3 fave songs for them. Perfection :)

lovely! i also love that song. the imagery was so fantastic and the snippets of scenes and moments were so perfect. there were a few lines and things here and there i wasn't in love with but the things i liked greatly outweighed those. fantastic!

~hil

Brilliant as always. Your fics always give me that poetic sense I don't get when I'm reading any other ones.

"Your limbs are entangled and intertwined, to the point that you don’t know where you end and she begins. And you think that at one time, you had both been so lost, but together, you could brave the unknown. And if there were nothing else in the world, you wouldn’t care. She will always be your home. For all time."

This is just so genius, and so the whole fic.

You're so good at this. Keep it up! ;)