This was beautiful but ...
How could you do this to me m-my heart I crying so much

This was so beautifully written. I was not expecting the ending and I most definitely cried but I think it suited the tone of the story. Thank you for writing this wonderful piece!

whyyyyyyyy im crying so hard right now and my grandma came in to see me sobbing and i didnt want to explain whuyyyyyyyyyyy sonow i tihnk they are considering taking me to a mental hospital

THIS IS THE SADDEST THING I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE BUT ALSO SO AMAZING I HAVE NO WORDS

this is so good that i hate you. it almost made me cry

Bad start. The Valerius is "ancient", but it's only been around since the Victorian era? That's less than 200 years! That's recent, not ancient.

For the record I hate you. This is beautiful and i love it but I also did not ask to havr my heart ripped from my chest this late.

Why did Harry have to die? Couldn't it have been a happy ending

Can I request an alternate ending? Please?

I have read the translation of this story in Spanish.
I'm terrible in English, so I'm using a free translator because I need to tell you that your work is wonderful.
I think I've never enjoyed something so much that I've cried a lot.
I would like to say many more things, but translators usually do not work well.
Thank you very much for creating something so beautiful.

Beautiful story, Awesome writing :)

Seriously? This isn't a flame, I'm just reviewing with tear-induced passion. Of all the endings you could have done, you chose the death or Harry one? I'm going to stop writing before I start cussing at the unfairness of it all.

No words.

I so hate you right now

This has me bawling my eyes out. Such a tragic ending. Almost Romeo and Juliet like in its way.
You just want them to be happy. To be together and he did so much and his final gift was to save the one he loved above all else.