this is a good start :) You've set up the scene and the introduced the characters, and I can see that they are pretty much in character at this point. Good work!

I love this story so far. It's got me hooked now. Hope you update soon :D

Yay! An update! Write On, dude!

-Randomstalker

Ooh, please update! I love how you added other characters like Pip and Kevin. And throwing in Bradley was an unexpected but awesome twist! Write On!

-Randomstalker

It seems Butters attraction to Eric derives from having been oppressed and sheltered all of his life and Eric is like a door to something more exciting and satisfying..

Also

I went to the flea market today and this big fat white guy was selling shit with the Swastika on it. Knives..flags..patches..I got the fuck out of that tent PDQ!

If Kenny weren't such a flirt, I'd tell Butters to go be with him..but I bet Kenny would be flirting his stuff all over the place and poor Butters wouldn't do a thing! Oh poor Butters U_U

It seems odd that they're only just now talking to him about his relationship with Eric after having dated him for two years. I suspect they'd have intervened earlier due to Cartmans influencing ways.

Other than that, it was interesting. I didn't know his parents knew and thought they'd bust him or something XD

As for that room..I'm curious..

I suspect at this point it's his dads gay room. If I recall correctly, both Butters and his Mother found out about 's homosexuality in one episode which would surprise me since you stated they were against Butters' bi-curiousness.

I liked where Butters recalled that tp'ing houses wasn't very nice either. I chuckled at that.

Eric seems, unfortunately for Butters, much more IC is this Chapter. I feel Butters pain U_U

I feel like Eric should be less affectionate with Butters and like he cares too much. Not sure why or how to explain. It almost seems as if Cartman is out of characterly clingy to Butters when he pouts at Butters for not wanting to join him. I dunno, maybe he's just being over dramatically pleading, but I don't get that feeling.

Also, instead of usin to start sentences, what about adverbs?

Carefully I tip toed to my window.

As the parents continued their banter my eyes swept across my room. Etc.

Luv ya 3

The very end where they were walking home seemed to have no segue from art class. They were at art then suddenly walking home.

Otherwise you captures Butters very well!

Awwr D I wanna see what happeeeeennnnsss

Can't wait for the next part! I'm glad this is coming along!

I love the random Fag part 33

WTF with the first review? Lol...

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other than that cutters is hard to write